Day 13 Journaling

Today I did a drafting for my French class's homework. I had to write about a man who was fighting with his girlfriend. I did it for an hour and my wrist was tired 😫...
For lunch, I went to my grandparents's flat and had lunch with them. I really enjoyed it and for the afternoon, we did a puzzle. It was really hard ...
Then I went back to my house. I think I am pretty lucky to live close of my grandparents (only my father's parents, my mother's parents live in a city who's at 2 hours of driving) because I can see them often!
I hope you enjoyed your day, be happy!!!

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Day 13 Journaling

Today I did a drafting for my of my homework for French class's homework.

I had to write about a man who was fighting with his girlfriend.

I didworked on it for an hour and my wrist wasbecame tired 😫...

For lunch, I went to my grandparents's flat and had lunch with them.

I really enjoyed it and for, in the afternoon, we did a puzzle.

It was really hard ...

Then I went back to my houshome.

This is more natural in the US.

I think I am pretty lucky to live close tof my grandparents (only my father's parents, my mother's parents live in a city who's at 2 hours of drivingich is two hours away by car) because I can see them often!

I hope you enjoyed your day, b. Be happy!!!

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Lucky you indeed! Good work!

Thanks again for all your corrections!

I had to write about aone man who was fighting with his girlfriend.

I really enjoyed it and for the afternoonafter lunch, we did a puzzle.

or (in the afternoon)

Then I went back to my house.me

"House" is also great but it sounds more like "building"

I think I am pretty lucky to live close tof my grandparents (only my father's parents, my mother's parents live in a city who's atin 2 hours of driving) because I can see them often!

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Day 13 Journaling


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Today I did a drafting for my French class's homework.


Today I did a drafting for my of my homework for French class's homework.

I had to write about a man who was fighting with his girlfriend.


I had to write about aone man who was fighting with his girlfriend.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I did it for an hour and my wrist was tired 😫...


I didworked on it for an hour and my wrist wasbecame tired 😫...

For lunch, I went to my grandparents's flat and had lunch with them.


For lunch, I went to my grandparents's flat and had lunch with them.

I really enjoyed it and for the afternoon, we did a puzzle.


I really enjoyed it and for the afternoonafter lunch, we did a puzzle.

or (in the afternoon)

I really enjoyed it and for, in the afternoon, we did a puzzle.

It was really hard ...


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Then I went back to my house.


Then I went back to my house.me

"House" is also great but it sounds more like "building"

Then I went back to my houshome.

This is more natural in the US.

I think I am pretty lucky to live close of my grandparents (only my father's parents, my mother's parents live in a city who's at 2 hours of driving) because I can see them often!


I think I am pretty lucky to live close tof my grandparents (only my father's parents, my mother's parents live in a city who's atin 2 hours of driving) because I can see them often!

I think I am pretty lucky to live close tof my grandparents (only my father's parents, my mother's parents live in a city who's at 2 hours of drivingich is two hours away by car) because I can see them often!

I hope you enjoyed your day, be happy!!!


I hope you enjoyed your day, b. Be happy!!!

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