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kailynhuynh96

Nov. 21, 2024

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Day 13

An effective solution to communicate within the family is to accept and respect each other’s characteristics. I believe that it is important to stop the attitude of trying to change someone to suit ourselves and try to respect each other. Besides, I think we should also spend more time with our family, try to enhance the connection and create an atmosphere that communicate comfortably with each other.


Một cách hiệu quả để thực hiện giao tiếp giữa gia đình là chấp nhận và có thái độ tôn trọng sự khác biệt của nhau. Tôi tin rằng điều quan trọng là từ bỏ thái độ cố gắng thay đổi đối phương cho phù hợp với bản thân và cố gắng tôn trọng lẫn nhau. Bên cạnh đó, tôi nghĩ chúng ta cũng nên dành thời gian cho gia đình, cố gắng nâng cao sự gắn bó và tạo không khí để giao tiếp thoải mái với nhau.

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Day 13

An effective solution to communicateing within the family is to accept and respect each other’s characteristics. ( or personality)

I believe that it is important to stop the attitude of trying to change someone to suit ourselves and try to respect each other.

Besides, I think we should also spend more time with our family, try to enhance the connectionrelationship and create an atmosphere that communicate comfortabs effectively with each other.

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kailynhuynh96

Nov. 26, 2024

47

Thank you for your correction.

Day 13

An effective solution to communicateion within the family is to accept and respect each other’s characteristicsbehaviour.

I believe that it is important to stop the attitude of trying to change someone to suit ourselves and try to respect each other.

Besides, I think we should also spend more time with our family, try to enhance the connection and create an atmosphere that allows us to communicate comfortably with each other.

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Good work. Just rephrased a few things.

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kailynhuynh96

Nov. 26, 2024

47

Thank you for your correction.

Day 13


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An effective solution to communicate within the family is to accept and respect each other’s characteristics.


An effective solution to communicateion within the family is to accept and respect each other’s characteristicsbehaviour.

An effective solution to communicateing within the family is to accept and respect each other’s characteristics. ( or personality)

I believe that it is important to stop the attitude of trying to change someone to suit me and try to respect each other.


Besides, I think we should also spend more time with our family, try to enhance the connection and create an atmosphere that communicate comfortably with each other.


Besides, I think we should also spend more time with our family, try to enhance the connection and create an atmosphere that allows us to communicate comfortably with each other.

Besides, I think we should also spend more time with our family, try to enhance the connectionrelationship and create an atmosphere that communicate comfortabs effectively with each other.

I believe that it is important to stop the attitude of trying to change someone to suit ourselves and try to respect each other.


I believe that it is important to stop the attitude of trying to change someone to suit ourselves and try to respect each other.

I believe that it is important to stop the attitude of trying to change someone to suit ourselves and try to respect each other.

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