Day 11 Journaling

Hello 👋
Today I'm not going to tel you how my day was and what I did during it, but I am going to introduce my family and my pets to you.
I am lucky to have my two parents with me and I have 2 brothers : one little brother and one big brother. I love them all : )
I also have 4 pets : 1 bunny and 3 chicken 🐔
Thanks for the corrections

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Day 11 Journaling

Hello. 👋

Today I'm not going to tell you how my day was and what I did during it, but I am going to introduce my family and my pets to you.

I am lucky to have my two parents with me and I also have 2two brothers : one little brother and one big brother.

I love them all. : )

:)

I also have 4four pets : 1one bunny and 3three chickens. 🐔

Thanks for the corrections.

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Very sweet! Well done!

Thanks 😊

Today, I'm not going to tell you how my day was and what I did during it, but. I am going to introduce my family and my pets to you.

J'ai divisé la phrase en deux. Une phrase très longue, ça fait bizzare. Aussi, "during it," c'est redondant.

I am lucky to have my twoboth of my parents with me and I have 2 brothers : one little brother and one big brother.

En anglais, Les deux-points ne sont pas précédés d'un espace. Aussi, quand il n'y a que deux choses possible (comme deux parents, par exemple), on peu dire "both."

I also have 4 pets : 1 bunny and 3 chickens 🐔

Pour la même raison. Aussi, "chickens" au pluriel.

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Bien fait! :)

Merci beaucoup!

Day 11 Journaling

Hello 👋

Today I'm not going to tell you how my day was and what I did during it, but I am going to introduce my family and my pets (to you).

I am lucky to have my two parents with me and Ito have 2 brothers : one little brother and one big brother.

I love them all : )

I also have 4 pets : 1 bunny and 3 chickens 🐔

Thanks for the corrections

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Awww, I want some pet chickens!

Thanks for the correction ! :)

I also have 4 pets : 1 bunny and 3 chicken 🐔


I also have 4 pets : 1 bunny and 3 chickens 🐔

I also have 4 pets : 1 bunny and 3 chickens 🐔

Pour la même raison. Aussi, "chickens" au pluriel.

I also have 4four pets : 1one bunny and 3three chickens. 🐔

Thanks for the corrections


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Thanks for the corrections.

Day 11 Journaling


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Hello 👋


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Hello. 👋

Today I'm not going to tel you how my day was and what I did during it, but I am going to introduce my family and my pets to you.


Today I'm not going to tell you how my day was and what I did during it, but I am going to introduce my family and my pets (to you).

Today, I'm not going to tell you how my day was and what I did during it, but. I am going to introduce my family and my pets to you.

J'ai divisé la phrase en deux. Une phrase très longue, ça fait bizzare. Aussi, "during it," c'est redondant.

Today I'm not going to tell you how my day was and what I did during it, but I am going to introduce my family and my pets to you.

I am lucky to have my two parents with me and I have 2 brothers : one little brother and one big brother.


I am lucky to have my two parents with me and Ito have 2 brothers : one little brother and one big brother.

I am lucky to have my twoboth of my parents with me and I have 2 brothers : one little brother and one big brother.

En anglais, Les deux-points ne sont pas précédés d'un espace. Aussi, quand il n'y a que deux choses possible (comme deux parents, par exemple), on peu dire "both."

I am lucky to have my two parents with me and I also have 2two brothers : one little brother and one big brother.

I love them all : )


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I love them all. : )

:)

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