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kailynhuynh96

Nov. 18, 2024

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Day 10

When we communicate actively with family members, communication can help to achieve several different positive effects. In case there were no communication and avoidance when conflicts happen in the family, we may be unable to find the fundamental solution for the problem. However, if we communicate to understand each other, we can resolve the misunderstandings and conflicts to reconnect the relationship. Additionally, daily active communication may also help us to understand each other’s thoughts and emotions, in order to create a positive atmosphere in the family.


Khi chúng ta giao tiếp trong gia đình một cách sôi nổi, việc giao tiếp có thể đạt được nhiều hiệu quả tích cực khác nhau. Trong trường hợp không giao tiếp và né tránh khi xảy ra mâu thuẫn trong gia đình thì không thể tìm ra giải pháp cơ bản cho vấn đề đó. Tuy nhiên, nếu chúng ta giao tiếp để hiểu ý nhau, chúng ta có thể giải quyết những hiểu lầm và xung đột để hàn gắn lại mối quan hệ. Không những thế, sự giao tiếp sôi nổi thường ngày còn giúp chúng ta hiểu được suy nghĩ và tình cảm của nhau, tạo nên một bầu không khí gia đình tích cực.

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Day 10

When we cCommunicateing actively with family members, communication can help to achieve several different positive effects.

Though the sentence is grammatically correct, mentioning communication again can sound redundant

In caseWhen there wereis no communication andresulting in avoidance when conflicts happen in the family, we may be unable to find the fundamental solution for the problem.

However, if we communicate to understand each other, we can resolve the misunderstandings and conflicts to reconnect the relationship.

Additionally, daily active communication may also help us to understand each other’s thoughts and emotions, in order toand create a positive atmosphere in the family.

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kailynhuynh96

Nov. 19, 2024

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Thank you for your correction.

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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When we communicate actively with family members, communication can help to achieve several different positive effects.


When we cCommunicateing actively with family members, communication can help to achieve several different positive effects.

Though the sentence is grammatically correct, mentioning communication again can sound redundant

In case there was no communication and avoidance when conflicts happen in the family, we may be unable to find the fundamental solution for the problem.


However, if we communicate to understand each other, we can resolve the misunderstandings and conflicts to reconnect the relationship.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Additionally, daily active communication may also help us to understand each other’s thoughts and emotions, in order to create a positive atmosphere in the family.


Additionally, daily active communication may also help us to understand each other’s thoughts and emotions, in order toand create a positive atmosphere in the family.

In case there were no communication and avoidance when conflicts happen in the family, we may be unable to find the fundamental solution for the problem.


In caseWhen there wereis no communication andresulting in avoidance when conflicts happen in the family, we may be unable to find the fundamental solution for the problem.

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