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Fernanhaiku

Jan. 13, 2025

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Day 1: Rebirth

This is my first time writing in English since last year june and I really want to take up English again 'cause I want to make my English sound perfect. Besides, because my English is rusty to be honest. Something that I really like to do is writing an entry by hand on my notebook and then type it on my computer and post it on langcorrect. I think that writing by hand makes me more conscious of what I'm trying to say and how to make it sound better. I'm also studying some other languages like Japanese and French. Hello my name is Everially and let's see if I can reach a 50 days streak. What are your target languages?

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This is my first time writing in English since June last year june and I really want to take up English again 'cause I want to make my English sound perfect.

Besides,I started writing again also because my English is rusty to be honest.

I feel that it's a little more natural if you restate the topic of which you're explaining with because here.

I think that writing by hand makes me more conscious of what I'm trying to say and how to make it sound better.

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Really great English Everially! I'm hoping you the best on your journey of 100% fluent English! My target language is Japanese but hope to learn more languages in the future!

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Fernanhaiku

Jan. 17, 2025

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Japanese is a beautiful language, probably one of the most beautiful that I have ever heard! Good luck in your journey of learning Japanese.

This is my first time writing in English since last year jin June, and I really want to take up English again 'cause I want to make my English sound perfect.

Besides, because my English is rusty to be honest.

Something that I really like to do is to writinge an entry by hand oin my notebook, and then type it on my computer and post it on langcorrect.

Hello, my name is Everially and let's see if I can reach a 50 days streak.

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Welcome back! You did very good and only had a few small mistakes. My target languages are German, Japanese, and Persian.

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Fernanhaiku

Jan. 17, 2025

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Wow Persian sounds like a really hard and interesting language. I'm going to do some reaserch about Persian language. Thanks for the corrections

Day 1: Rebirth

This is my first time writing in English since June of last year june and I really want to take up English again 'cause I want to make my English sound perfect.

I'm not marking it as wrong, but FYI 'cause is quite informal writing. Very common when spoken, fairly common on sites like Twitter (although these days I think "bc" is more common on Twitter, at least in my circles) but I definitely would not write it in an assignment for work or school.

Besides,Also because my English is rusty to be honest.

Something that I really like to do is writing an entry by hand oin my notebook and then typeing it on my computer and posting it on langcorrect.

You need parallel constructions for the verbs. Something I like to do is writing [...] and typing [...] and posting [...].

I think that writing by hand makes me more conscious of what I'm trying to say and how to make it sound better.

I'm also studying some other languages like Japanese and French.

Hello my name is Everially and let's see if I can reach a 50 -days streak.

What are your target languages?

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Hello, Everially! It's great to see you here! You write very well with only very minor mistakes. My target languages are also French and Japanese!

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Fernanhaiku

Jan. 17, 2025

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Wow what a coincidence, Good luck in your journey of learning French and Japanese. Thanks for the corrections

Day 1: Rebirth


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This is my first time writing in English since last year june and I really want to take up English again 'cause I want to make my English sound perfect.


This is my first time writing in English since June of last year june and I really want to take up English again 'cause I want to make my English sound perfect.

I'm not marking it as wrong, but FYI 'cause is quite informal writing. Very common when spoken, fairly common on sites like Twitter (although these days I think "bc" is more common on Twitter, at least in my circles) but I definitely would not write it in an assignment for work or school.

This is my first time writing in English since last year jin June, and I really want to take up English again 'cause I want to make my English sound perfect.

This is my first time writing in English since June last year june and I really want to take up English again 'cause I want to make my English sound perfect.

Besides, because my English is rusty to be honest.


Besides,Also because my English is rusty to be honest.

Besides, because my English is rusty to be honest.

Besides,I started writing again also because my English is rusty to be honest.

I feel that it's a little more natural if you restate the topic of which you're explaining with because here.

Something that I really like to do is writing an entry by hand on my notebook and then type it on my computer and post it on langcorrect.


Something that I really like to do is writing an entry by hand oin my notebook and then typeing it on my computer and posting it on langcorrect.

You need parallel constructions for the verbs. Something I like to do is writing [...] and typing [...] and posting [...].

Something that I really like to do is to writinge an entry by hand oin my notebook, and then type it on my computer and post it on langcorrect.

I think that writing by hand makes me more conscious of what I'm trying to say and how to make it sound better.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think that writing by hand makes me more conscious of what I'm trying to say and how to make it sound better.

I'm also studying some other languages like Japanese and French.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Hello my name is Everially and let's see if I can reach a 50 days streak.


Hello my name is Everially and let's see if I can reach a 50 -days streak.

Hello, my name is Everially and let's see if I can reach a 50 days streak.

What are your target languages?


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