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Fernanhaiku

Jan. 8, 2023

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Day 1 of my English Challenge.

I have read and corrected so many posts by people who write every day. For example the user courageuse19, a spanish learner who post on langcorrect every day, she has a streak of sixty eight days posting a diary entry on langcorrect. The user Mari, a Japanese learner, also writes every day a post in Japanese. So, I want to try the same. I'm going to write every day a diary entry and post it here to be corrected. One of my favorite says is "if they can do it, I can too" (I heard it from my mom when I was fifteen). So if courageuse19 and Mari write every day a diary entry every day and post them in here, I can do it too. I think that this challenge could really improve my English.

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Day 1 of mMy English Challenge.

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles and don't use a period at the end.

I have read and corrected so many posts by people who write every day.

For example, the user courageuse19, a sSpanish learner who posts on langcorrect every day, she has a streak of sixty -eight days posting a diary entry on langcorrect.

Shout out to courageuse19 - woo hoo!

or,

For example, the user courageuse19, a Spanish learner who posts on langcorrect every day, has a streak of 68 days.

We assume that the streak is for how many days they've been posting.

The user Mari, a Japanese learner, also writes a post every day a post in Japanese.

:)

We place "post" right after "writes" because it's the direct object of "writes." Then we write "every day ..." after it.

So, I want to try the same.

I'm going to write every day a diary entry every day and post it here to be corrected.

This is the same correction as the previous sentence.

One of my favorite sayings is, "iIf they can do it, I can, too." (I heard ithis from my mom when I was fifteen).)

The sentence within the parentheses is a complete sentence so we place the period directly after it and before the right parenthetical mark.

So if courageuse19 and Mari write every day a diary entry every day and post them in here, I can do it, too.

Yes, you can!

We always place a comma (,) before "too" no matter where it is in the sentence.

I think that this challenge could really improve my English.

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Good for you! It's good for me, too, because I always look forward to reading your posts. Good work and here's to your long streak of posts! :)

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Fernanhaiku

Jan. 9, 2023

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Thank you so much <3 you really encourage me so much to keep writing posts and poetry

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courageuse19

Feb. 14, 2023

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Thank you so much <3 you really encourage me so much to keep writing posts and poetry

Hi Fernanhaiku!

I read some of your journal. Keep going!

Day 1 of my English Challenge.

I have read and corrected so many posts by people who write every day.

So, I want to try the same.

I'm going to write every day a diary entry every day and post it here to be corrected.

The phrase "I'm going to write every day a diary entry" sounds a little off, so to make it sound more natural you can change the order to have the time of when you are going write after what you are writing - which in this case is the diary entries.

One of my favorite sayquotes is "if they can do it, I can too" (which I heard it from my mom when I was fifteen).

One of my favorite quotes, phrases and sayings are all words that work here. It's just a little more specific to help with understanding the context behind this sentence.

So if courageuse19 and Mari write every day a diary entry every day and post them in here, I can do it too.

No need for a second "every day" here :)

I think that this challenge could really improve my English.

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Good luck on your diary entry challenge! So far it is quite easy to understand what you are saying, there are only a few things that could use a bit of improvement but overall this is very good!

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Fernanhaiku

Jan. 9, 2023

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Thanks for all your corrections, I'll do my best with this challenge

Day 1 of my English Challenge.

I have read and corrected so many posts by people who write every day.

For example the user courageuse19, a sSpanish learner who posts on langcorrect every day, she has a streak of sixty -eight days posting a diary entry on langcorrect.

The user Mari, a Japanese learner, also writes, every day, a post in Japanese.

It would be more natural to move “every day” to the end of the sent, but if you want to leave it where it is, you should put commas before and after it.

So, I want to try the same.

I'm going to write, every day, a diary entry and post it here to be corrected.

It would be more natural to move “every day” after “diary entry.”

One of my favorite sayings is "if they can do it, I can too" (I heard it from my mom when I was fifteen).

So if courageuse19 and Mari write every day a diary entry every day and post them in here, I can do it too.

I think that this challenge could really improve my English.

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Sounds like a great idea!

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Fernanhaiku

Jan. 9, 2023

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Thank you!!

Day 1 of my English Challenge.

I have read and corrected so many posts by people who write every daily.

Just a more concise way of saying "every day."

For example, the user courageuse19, a sSpanish learner who post on langcorrect every day, she has a streak of sixty -eight days of posting a daily diary entry on langcorrect.

The user Mari, a Japanese learner, also writes every day adaily posts in Japanese.

So, I want to try to do the same.

I'm going to write every day aa daily diary entry and post it here to be corrected.

One of my favorite sayings is "if they can do it, I can too" (I heard it from my mom when I was fifteen).

So if courageuse19 and Mari can write every day a diary entry every daydaily diary entries and post them in here, I can do it too.

I think that this challenge couldwill really improve my English.

Good as is. Just another option here. "Will" makes it seem like you are more certain that this challenge will improve your English.

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Good luck on your endeavors! I have also started a similar goal of daily posts and am currently on day 22. There are days where I can't write as much, but I try my best to write something of satisfiable size every day.

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Fernanhaiku

Jan. 9, 2023

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Wow 22 days, that's an amazing streak. I'll also try to write even just a few words every day. Let's do our best!

Day 1 of my English Challenge.

I have read and corrected so many posts by people who write every day.

For example the user courageuse19, a spanish learner who post on langcorrect every day, she has a streak of sixty eight days posting a diary entryies on langcorrect.

The user Mari, a Japanese learner, also writes every day a post in Japanese every day.

So, I want to try the same.

I'm going to write every day a diary entry every day and post it here to be corrected.

One of my favorite sayings is "if they can do it, I can too" (I heard it from my mom when I was fifteen).

So if courageuse19 and Mari write every day a diary entry every day and post them in here, I can do it too.

I think that this challenge could really improve my English.

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This was really well written, your English is already of a very high standard, and I look forward to seeing your future posts! Good job!

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Fernanhaiku

Jan. 9, 2023

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Wow, thank you so much for your corrections and the compliment. I'll do my best with my challenge

Day 1 of my English Challenge.


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Day 1 of mMy English Challenge.

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles and don't use a period at the end.

I have read and corrected so many posts by people who write every day.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have read and corrected so many posts by people who write every daily.

Just a more concise way of saying "every day."

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

For example the user courageuse19, a spanish learner who post on langcorrect every day, she has a streak of sixty eight days posting a diary entry on langcorrect.


For example the user courageuse19, a spanish learner who post on langcorrect every day, she has a streak of sixty eight days posting a diary entryies on langcorrect.

For example, the user courageuse19, a sSpanish learner who post on langcorrect every day, she has a streak of sixty -eight days of posting a daily diary entry on langcorrect.

For example the user courageuse19, a sSpanish learner who posts on langcorrect every day, she has a streak of sixty -eight days posting a diary entry on langcorrect.

For example, the user courageuse19, a sSpanish learner who posts on langcorrect every day, she has a streak of sixty -eight days posting a diary entry on langcorrect.

Shout out to courageuse19 - woo hoo! or, For example, the user courageuse19, a Spanish learner who posts on langcorrect every day, has a streak of 68 days. We assume that the streak is for how many days they've been posting.

The user Mari, a Japanese learner, also writes every day a post in Japanese.


The user Mari, a Japanese learner, also writes every day a post in Japanese every day.

The user Mari, a Japanese learner, also writes every day adaily posts in Japanese.

The user Mari, a Japanese learner, also writes, every day, a post in Japanese.

It would be more natural to move “every day” to the end of the sent, but if you want to leave it where it is, you should put commas before and after it.

The user Mari, a Japanese learner, also writes a post every day a post in Japanese.

:) We place "post" right after "writes" because it's the direct object of "writes." Then we write "every day ..." after it.

So, I want to try the same.


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So, I want to try to do the same.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm going to write every day a diary entry and post it here to be corrected.


I'm going to write every day a diary entry every day and post it here to be corrected.

I'm going to write every day aa daily diary entry and post it here to be corrected.

I'm going to write, every day, a diary entry and post it here to be corrected.

It would be more natural to move “every day” after “diary entry.”

I'm going to write every day a diary entry every day and post it here to be corrected.

The phrase "I'm going to write every day a diary entry" sounds a little off, so to make it sound more natural you can change the order to have the time of when you are going write after what you are writing - which in this case is the diary entries.

I'm going to write every day a diary entry every day and post it here to be corrected.

This is the same correction as the previous sentence.

One of my favorite says is "if they can do it, I can too" (I heard it from my mom when I was fifteen).


One of my favorite sayings is "if they can do it, I can too" (I heard it from my mom when I was fifteen).

One of my favorite sayings is "if they can do it, I can too" (I heard it from my mom when I was fifteen).

One of my favorite sayings is "if they can do it, I can too" (I heard it from my mom when I was fifteen).

One of my favorite sayquotes is "if they can do it, I can too" (which I heard it from my mom when I was fifteen).

One of my favorite quotes, phrases and sayings are all words that work here. It's just a little more specific to help with understanding the context behind this sentence.

One of my favorite sayings is, "iIf they can do it, I can, too." (I heard ithis from my mom when I was fifteen).)

The sentence within the parentheses is a complete sentence so we place the period directly after it and before the right parenthetical mark.

So if courageuse19 and Mari write every day a diary entry every day and post them in here, I can do it too.


So if courageuse19 and Mari write every day a diary entry every day and post them in here, I can do it too.

So if courageuse19 and Mari can write every day a diary entry every daydaily diary entries and post them in here, I can do it too.

So if courageuse19 and Mari write every day a diary entry every day and post them in here, I can do it too.

So if courageuse19 and Mari write every day a diary entry every day and post them in here, I can do it too.

No need for a second "every day" here :)

So if courageuse19 and Mari write every day a diary entry every day and post them in here, I can do it, too.

Yes, you can! We always place a comma (,) before "too" no matter where it is in the sentence.

I think that this challenge could really improve my English.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think that this challenge couldwill really improve my English.

Good as is. Just another option here. "Will" makes it seem like you are more certain that this challenge will improve your English.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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