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DAY 1

我觉得今天是很好的日子,我感到很高兴。我才知道我的朋友很关心我。以前,我以为他们都不把我当做朋友。这个的原因让我感到高兴,我能建立了更好的友谊,还能活了更有意思的生活。


I think that today was a really nice day, I felt so happy. I just realized that my friends care so much about me. Before, I thought that they don't look me as a friend. This reason made me to feel happy, I could establish a better friendship, also I could live a more interesting life.

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DAY 1

我觉得今天是很好的日子,我感到很高兴。

我才知道我的朋友很关心我。

以前,我以为他们都不把我当做朋友。

这个的原因让因此今天我感到高兴,我能建立更好的友谊,还能活了更有意思的生活。

DAY 1

我觉得今天是很好的日子,我感到很高兴。

才知道我的朋友很关心我。

以前,我以为他们都不把我当做朋友。

这个的原因让我感到高兴,我能建立更好的友谊,还能活出 or 过上更有意思的生活。

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我觉得今天是很好的日子,我感到很高兴。


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我觉得今天是很好的日子,我感到很高兴。

我才知道我的朋友很关心我。


才知道我的朋友很关心我。

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以前,我以为他们都不把我当做朋友。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

这个的原因让我感到高兴,我能建立了更好的友谊,还能活了更有意思的生活。


这个的原因让我感到高兴,我能建立更好的友谊,还能活出 or 过上更有意思的生活。

这个的原因让因此今天我感到高兴,我能建立更好的友谊,还能活了更有意思的生活。

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