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Day 01: I'm back...
When I started writing posts here I was so excited. I had a lot of things to talk about and the positive feedback always made me happy. I was motivated and eager to learn. But after a few weeks, I had no more interesting topics to write a post about, so I stopped. But in the meantime, I think I learned a lot and my English improved, so I decided to start over. That's it, I'm here.
Yesterday I finished reading a book from Andy Weir. It's the 'Martian', his first novel. It's a masterpiece if you ask me. I really like it's cynical style so I tried to master it somehow because I am too, but I can't express it well in English. I recently bought two other books, so I'll keep going to read to improve.
I'm working on a really big project anyway. It's a pretty big database for my master's thesis developed in Python. It'll be fully automatic, customizable and scalable. I've been working on it for 4 months, but I don't see the finish line yet. But it must be somewhere ahead of me, so I'll find it and cross it. Or go through it? I don't know, maybe both are good, maybe not. Tell me!
Day 01: I'm bBack...
Proper capitalization in your title.
When I started writing posts here, I was so excited.
Add a comma after “here” to separate the introductory clause
I had a lot of things to talk about, and the positive feedback always made me happy.
Add a comma before “and” because the sentence has two independent clauses.
But after a few weeks, I had no more interesting topics to write a post about, so I stopped.
"to write about" Shorter and smoother phrasing.
But iIn the meantime, I think I learned a lot, and my English improved, so I decided to start over.
Remove second “But” to avoid repetition.
Yesterday, I finished reading a book fromby Andy Weir.
Add comma after “Yesterday” for clarity.
"by Andy Weir." Correct preposition when referring to authorship.
It's t'The 'Martian', his first novel.
Capitalize the book title correctly.
I really like it's cynical style, so I tried to master it somehow because I am too, but I can't express it well in English.
"its" Correct possessive form.
Add comma before “so” for clarity.
I recently bought two other books, so I'll keep going to reading to improve.
"keep reading" More natural phrasing.
I'm working on a really big project anyway.
You can also say, "Anyway, I’m working on a really big project."
It's a pretty big database for my master's thesis, developed in Python.
Add comma before “developed in Python” to separate descriptive clause.
I've been working on it for 4four months, but I don't see the finish line yet.
Spell out numbers under ten.
Feedback
Corrections are mostly about grammar consistency and punctuation. Good job, keep writing!
I can feel your excitement about your new hobbies. You can use it as your journal entry here. Also, honestly, I'm not really familiar with Python, so I don't think I should say something about that 😂
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Thank you for your feedback!
Those commas are driving me crazy. I have to use them completely differently than in my native language. I can't get used to it.
Anyway, my plan is to write about my (new) hobbies every day or so. I hope they'll give me enough thoughts for a long journal.
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When I started writing posts here I was so excited. When I started writing posts here, I was so excited. Add a comma after “here” to separate the introductory clause |
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I had a lot of things to talk about and the positive feedback always made me happy. I had a lot of things to talk about, and the positive feedback always made me happy. Add a comma before “and” because the sentence has two independent clauses. |
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I was motivated and eager to learn. |
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But after a few weeks, I had no more interesting topics to write a post about, so I stopped. But after a few weeks, I had no more interesting topics to write "to write about" Shorter and smoother phrasing. |
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But in the meantime, I think I learned a lot and my English improved, so I decided to start over.
Remove second “But” to avoid repetition. |
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That's it, I'm here. |
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Day 01: I'm back... Day 01: I'm Proper capitalization in your title. |
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Yesterday I finished reading a book from Andy Weir. Yesterday, I finished reading a book Add comma after “Yesterday” for clarity. "by Andy Weir." Correct preposition when referring to authorship. |
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It's the 'Martian', his first novel. It's Capitalize the book title correctly. |
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It's a masterpiece if you ask me. |
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I really like it's cynical style so I tried to master it somehow because I am too, but I can't express it well in English. I really like it "its" Correct possessive form. Add comma before “so” for clarity. |
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I recently bought two other books, so I'll keep going to read to improve. I recently bought two other books, so I'll keep "keep reading" More natural phrasing. |
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I'm working on a really big project anyway. I'm working on a really big project anyway. You can also say, "Anyway, I’m working on a really big project." |
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It's a pretty big database for my master's thesis developed in Python. It's a pretty big database for my master's thesis, developed in Python. Add comma before “developed in Python” to separate descriptive clause. |
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It'll be fully automatic, customizable and scalable. |
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I've been working on it for 4 months, but I don't see the finish line yet. I've been working on it for Spell out numbers under ten. |
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But it must be somewhere ahead of me, so I'll find it and cross it. |
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Or go through it? |
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I don't know, maybe both are good, maybe not. |
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Tell me! |
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