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tana_gao

April 26, 2023

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Dating App

I tried using Bumble for two days, and the experience was both fun and weird. People seem uncertain about what they are looking for, and I feel the same way too.

During one conversation, a man told me a dad joke, and we talked about our favorite music and our views of the world. However, it is hard to have chemistry with someone I have never met in person. When I was younger, I had similar experiences, but it was more like a crush. Online love is mostly about ourselves and our imagination.

Perhaps, I do not know how to love or what a healthy relationship is. Interestingly, people often use 'something casual' to describe their goals.

After breaking up with my ex-boyfriend, I feel like I have lost a part of myself, and I am numb to emotions. Maybe I should not rely on a dating app or another person to save me. Instead, I need to focus on rebuilding my life first.

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Dating App

or,

A Dating App

I tried using Bumble for two days, and the experience was both fun and weird.

People seem uncertain about what they are looking for, and I feel the same way, too.

During one conversation, a man told me a dad joke, and we talked about our favorite music and our views of the world.

However, it is hardIt is hard, however, to have chemistry with someone I have never met in person.

When I was younger, I had similar experiences, but it was more like a crush.

Online love is mostly about ourselves and our imagination.

Perhaps, I do not know how to love or what a healthy relationship is.

Interestingly, people often use '"something casual'" to describe their goals.

What the heck does that mean?! How is "something casual" a goal?

After breaking up with my ex-boyfriend, I feel like I have lost a part of myself, and because I am numb to emotions.

I think feeling numb or feeling as if we've lost a part of ourselves is a common result of a breakup. Remember, time heals all wounds so keep on living. You'll get there!

Maybe I should not rely on a dating app or another person to save me.

Instead, I need to focus on rebuilding my life first.

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That's a very, very healthy response! Good for you! Again, your writing is awesome!

Dating App

I tried using Bumble for two days, and the experience was both fun and weird.

People seem uncertain about what they are looking for, and I feel the same way too.

'too' is redundant here (as you are using same)

During one conversation, a man told me a dad joke, and we talked about our favorite music and our views ofn the world.

However, it iwas hard to have chemistry with someone I have never met in person.

if you are continuing from the previous anecdote, you want to relate directly; if you're talking more generally, might make more sense to say 'hard to have chemistry with someone you have never met in person'

When I was younger, I had similar experiences, but it was more like a crush.

'it' and 'similar' are a little unclear here - what part of the situation? what was more like a crush?

Online love is mostly about ourselves and our imagination.

Perhaps, I do not know how to love or what a healthy relationship is.

Interestingly, people often use 'something casual' to describe their goals.

After breaking up with my ex-boyfriend, I feel like I have lost a part of myself, and I am numb to emotions.

Maybe I should not rely on a dating app or another person to save me.

Instead, I need to focus on rebuilding my life first.

Feedback

hope you're feeling better! great work.

Perhaps, I do not know how to love or what a healthy relationship is.

Comma is not needed here.

Interestingly, people often use 'something casual' to describe their goals.

No correction here, but this doesn’t make sense to me. I think you used the wrong word “goals” in this case. Something casual in the context of a dating app might be a relationship preference vs. a goal. Is that what you meant?

Feedback

This was well-written and I couldn’t find any other corrections or issues that stood out to me

Dating App


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Dating App

or, A Dating App

I tried using Bumble for two days, and the experience was both fun and weird.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

People seem uncertain about what they are looking for, and I feel the same way too.


People seem uncertain about what they are looking for, and I feel the same way too.

'too' is redundant here (as you are using same)

People seem uncertain about what they are looking for, and I feel the same way, too.

During one conversation, a man told me a dad joke, and we talked about our favorite music and our views of the world.


During one conversation, a man told me a dad joke, and we talked about our favorite music and our views ofn the world.

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However, it is hard to have chemistry with someone I have never met in person.


However, it iwas hard to have chemistry with someone I have never met in person.

if you are continuing from the previous anecdote, you want to relate directly; if you're talking more generally, might make more sense to say 'hard to have chemistry with someone you have never met in person'

However, it is hardIt is hard, however, to have chemistry with someone I have never met in person.

When I was younger, I had similar experiences, but it was more like a crush.


When I was younger, I had similar experiences, but it was more like a crush.

'it' and 'similar' are a little unclear here - what part of the situation? what was more like a crush?

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Online love is mostly about ourselves and our imagination.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Perhaps, I do not know how to love or what a healthy relationship is.


Perhaps, I do not know how to love or what a healthy relationship is.

Comma is not needed here.

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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Interestingly, people often use 'something casual' to describe their goals.


Interestingly, people often use 'something casual' to describe their goals.

No correction here, but this doesn’t make sense to me. I think you used the wrong word “goals” in this case. Something casual in the context of a dating app might be a relationship preference vs. a goal. Is that what you meant?

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Interestingly, people often use '"something casual'" to describe their goals.

What the heck does that mean?! How is "something casual" a goal?

After breaking up with my ex-boyfriend, I feel like I have lost a part of myself, and I am numb to emotions.


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After breaking up with my ex-boyfriend, I feel like I have lost a part of myself, and because I am numb to emotions.

I think feeling numb or feeling as if we've lost a part of ourselves is a common result of a breakup. Remember, time heals all wounds so keep on living. You'll get there!

Maybe I should not rely on a dating app or another person to save me.


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Instead, I need to focus on rebuilding my life first.


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