April 26, 2023
I tried using Bumble for two days, and the experience was both fun and weird. People seem uncertain about what they are looking for, and I feel the same way too.
During one conversation, a man told me a dad joke, and we talked about our favorite music and our views of the world. However, it is hard to have chemistry with someone I have never met in person. When I was younger, I had similar experiences, but it was more like a crush. Online love is mostly about ourselves and our imagination.
Perhaps, I do not know how to love or what a healthy relationship is. Interestingly, people often use 'something casual' to describe their goals.
After breaking up with my ex-boyfriend, I feel like I have lost a part of myself, and I am numb to emotions. Maybe I should not rely on a dating app or another person to save me. Instead, I need to focus on rebuilding my life first.
Dating App
or,
A Dating App
I tried using Bumble for two days, and the experience was both fun and weird.
People seem uncertain about what they are looking for, and I feel the same way, too.
During one conversation, a man told me a dad joke, and we talked about our favorite music and our views of the world.
However, it is hardIt is hard, however, to have chemistry with someone I have never met in person.
When I was younger, I had similar experiences, but it was more like a crush.
Online love is mostly about ourselves and our imagination.
Perhaps, I do not know how to love or what a healthy relationship is.
Interestingly, people often use '"something casual'" to describe their goals.
What the heck does that mean?! How is "something casual" a goal?
After breaking up with my ex-boyfriend, I feel like I have lost a part of myself, and because I am numb to emotions.
I think feeling numb or feeling as if we've lost a part of ourselves is a common result of a breakup. Remember, time heals all wounds so keep on living. You'll get there!
Maybe I should not rely on a dating app or another person to save me.
Instead, I need to focus on rebuilding my life first.
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That's a very, very healthy response! Good for you! Again, your writing is awesome!
Dating App
I tried using Bumble for two days, and the experience was both fun and weird.
People seem uncertain about what they are looking for, and I feel the same way too.
'too' is redundant here (as you are using same)
During one conversation, a man told me a dad joke, and we talked about our favorite music and our views ofn the world.
However, it iwas hard to have chemistry with someone I have never met in person.
if you are continuing from the previous anecdote, you want to relate directly; if you're talking more generally, might make more sense to say 'hard to have chemistry with someone you have never met in person'
When I was younger, I had similar experiences, but it was more like a crush.
'it' and 'similar' are a little unclear here - what part of the situation? what was more like a crush?
Online love is mostly about ourselves and our imagination.
Perhaps, I do not know how to love or what a healthy relationship is.
Interestingly, people often use 'something casual' to describe their goals.
After breaking up with my ex-boyfriend, I feel like I have lost a part of myself, and I am numb to emotions.
Maybe I should not rely on a dating app or another person to save me.
Instead, I need to focus on rebuilding my life first.
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hope you're feeling better! great work.
Perhaps, I do not know how to love or what a healthy relationship is.
Comma is not needed here.
Interestingly, people often use 'something casual' to describe their goals.
No correction here, but this doesn’t make sense to me. I think you used the wrong word “goals” in this case. Something casual in the context of a dating app might be a relationship preference vs. a goal. Is that what you meant?
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This was well-written and I couldn’t find any other corrections or issues that stood out to me
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People seem uncertain about what they are looking for, and I feel the same way too. People seem uncertain about what they are looking for, and I feel the same way 'too' is redundant here (as you are using same) People seem uncertain about what they are looking for, and I feel the same way, too. |
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However, it is hard to have chemistry with someone I have never met in person. However, it if you are continuing from the previous anecdote, you want to relate directly; if you're talking more generally, might make more sense to say 'hard to have chemistry with someone you have never met in person'
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When I was younger, I had similar experiences, but it was more like a crush. When I was younger, I had similar experiences, but it was more like a crush. 'it' and 'similar' are a little unclear here - what part of the situation? what was more like a crush? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Online love is mostly about ourselves and our imagination. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Interestingly, people often use 'something casual' to describe their goals. Interestingly, people often use 'something casual' to describe their goals. No correction here, but this doesn’t make sense to me. I think you used the wrong word “goals” in this case. Something casual in the context of a dating app might be a relationship preference vs. a goal. Is that what you meant? This sentence has been marked as perfect! Interestingly, people often use What the heck does that mean?! How is "something casual" a goal? |
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