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Datemaki

I wrote about the Japanese New Year's food "osechi" yesterday.

There are variety of food in the osechi.

I'd like to try to write one of them.

"Datemaki" is one of my favorite dishes in osechi.

It's a sweet egg roll made with eggs and fish paste.

You might think, "Eww, fish and eggs?", but it's actually tasty.

It doesn't smell fishy at all.

It's the food we eat on New Year's, but it's sold in a supermarket throughout the year.

However, we rarely eat it as everyday meal.


昨日、日本のお正月の食べ物おせちについて書きました。

おせちにはいろいろな食べ物があります。

その中の一つを書いてみたいと思います。

伊達巻きは、私の好きなおせちです。

それは、卵と魚で作られている甘い卵ロールです。

「えー、卵と魚?」って思うかもしれませんが、実はおいしいんです。

全然、魚臭くないんです。

それは、お正月に食べるものですが、実は一年中お店で売られています。

でも、毎日の食事では、めったに食べません。

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Datemaki

I wrote about the Japanese New Year's food "osechi" yesterday.

There are a variety of foods in the osechi.

OR: "There is a variety of food in the osechi."

I'd like to try to write about one of them.

"Datemaki" is one of my favorite dishes in osechi.

It's a sweet egg roll made with eggs and fish paste.

You might think, "Eww, fish and eggs?", but it's actually tasty.

It doesn't smell fishy at all.

It's the food we eat on New Year's, but it's sold in a supermarkets throughout the year.

Not just one supermarket, but generally in all or many supermarkets.

However, we rarely eat it as an everyday meal.

Feedback

Excellent work - only a few very minor mistakes. And it sounds like a tasty dish, I will definitely have to try it some day.

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Thank you so much for your corrections! I'm glad that you are interested in Japanese food.

Datemaki


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I wrote about the Japanese New Year's food "osechi" yesterday.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There are variety of food in the osechi.


There are a variety of foods in the osechi.

OR: "There is a variety of food in the osechi."

I'd like to try to write one of them.


I'd like to try to write about one of them.

"Datemaki" is one of my favorite dishes in osechi.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's a sweet egg roll made with eggs and fish paste.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You might think, "Eww, fish and eggs?", but it's actually tasty.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It doesn't smell fishy at all.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's the food we eat on New Year's, but it's sold in a supermarket throughout the year.


It's the food we eat on New Year's, but it's sold in a supermarkets throughout the year.

Not just one supermarket, but generally in all or many supermarkets.

However, we rarely eat it as everyday meal.


However, we rarely eat it as an everyday meal.

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