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noko

July 23, 2025

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Dancing Is Fun

There was a dance lesson for a sports festival today. Today was different from yesterday; I had little fun. Although I like dancing, my dance looks bad so I have to practice hard to be seen cool during this summer vacation.


今日はダンス練だったので昨日と違って少し楽しかった。私はダンスが好きだが、ダサく見えるのでカッコよく見られるように夏休み中に一生懸命練習しようと思います。

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Dancing Is Fun

There was a dance lesson for a sports festival today.

Today was different from yesterday; I had little fun.

"I had little fun" is like saying the amount of fun you had was minimal; in other words, it was not fun. But even if this is what you meant, a more natural expression would be "it wasn't very fun." In other words, it is slightly negative.

But in case you meant the opposite (you did have fun, but nothing overly exciting), you would say "I had a little fun." In other words, it is slightly positive.

Although I like dancing, myI dance lpooks badrly, so I have to practice hard in order to be seen as cool during this summer vacation.

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Great job. I respect dancers, it isn't something I can do personally :)

Although I like dancing, my dance looks bad so I have to practicse hard to be seen as cool during this summer vacation.

"practise" = verb and "practice" = noun unless you're learning American English

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Great job! Your English is really good

Dancing Is Fun

There was a dance lesson for a sports festival today.

Today was different from yesterday; I had a little fun.

"I had little fun" implies that you did not have fun. Conversely, "I had a little fun" implies that you did have fun, though it's still not much. (English is strange, isn't it?)

Although I like dancing, my danceing looks bad, so I have to practice hard to be seenlook cool (during) this summer vacation.

(1) Added a comma to help with the pacing of the sentence.
(2) You may omit "during", but having it is also fine.

Dancing Is Fun


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There was a dance lesson for a sports festival today.


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Today was different from yesterday; I had little fun.


Today was different from yesterday; I had a little fun.

"I had little fun" implies that you did not have fun. Conversely, "I had a little fun" implies that you did have fun, though it's still not much. (English is strange, isn't it?)

Today was different from yesterday; I had little fun.

"I had little fun" is like saying the amount of fun you had was minimal; in other words, it was not fun. But even if this is what you meant, a more natural expression would be "it wasn't very fun." In other words, it is slightly negative. But in case you meant the opposite (you did have fun, but nothing overly exciting), you would say "I had a little fun." In other words, it is slightly positive.

Although I like dancing, my dance looks bad so I have to practice hard to be seen cool during this summer vacation.


Although I like dancing, my danceing looks bad, so I have to practice hard to be seenlook cool (during) this summer vacation.

(1) Added a comma to help with the pacing of the sentence. (2) You may omit "during", but having it is also fine.

Although I like dancing, my dance looks bad so I have to practicse hard to be seen as cool during this summer vacation.

"practise" = verb and "practice" = noun unless you're learning American English

Although I like dancing, myI dance lpooks badrly, so I have to practice hard in order to be seen as cool during this summer vacation.

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