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Dairy 11.07.25

Hello everyone! I have disappeared for a long time and I didn’t practice English all this time, but I returned and I’m filled of energy again! I’m glad to be here, honestly, you are great partners in learning English and in communication, thank you very much.

Okay, what about my days? I have started dancing finally! I sit down every day, so my body feels bad. But things have changed even after one week after my first dance class! I’m very shy at the lessons, I don’t know how to move beautifully, but I think it is a process. Maybe I can feel my body only after one-two-three years of these classes.

Then I try to communicate with guys. I want to find my person for all my life and create family, but now I can’t find this match. And I realized that I become super tiered at online communication (I speak only about romantic relationships) Now I decided not to wast my time and after a few sentences about person arrange a live-meeting. There I can see how person can express themselves, how it feels in energy level. And it also shows that how really person want to do something for you (even just set a meeting and set time for it)

Now I am on my way to country side! I will be here for weekends. I plan to swim in a lake and walk a lot, because there are amazing fresh air comparing the air in Moscow.

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I have disappeared for a long time and I didn’haven't practiced English all this time, but I returned and I’am fiulled of energy again!

I’m glad to be here, honestly, you are great partners in learning English and in communication, thank you very much.

Okay, what about my days?

I have finally started dancing finally!

But things have changed even after one week after my first dance class!

I’m very shy at the lessons,; I don’t know how to move beautifully, but I think it is a process.

Maybe I can feel my body only after one-two-three years of these classes.

Then I try to communicate with guys.

I want to find my person for all my life and create a family, but now I can’t find this match.

I will be here for weekends.

I plan to swim in a lake and walk a lot, because there areis amazing fresh air comparinged to the air in Moscow.

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Great to read that you've started dancing! I've always wanted to learn.

Daiary 11.07.25

'Dairy' is the word for products made with cow's milk.

I have disappeared for a long time and I didn’t practice English all this time, but I returned and I’m fiulled of energy again!

I’m glad to be here, honestly, you are great partners infor learning English and in communication, thank you very much.

'Partners in learning English' makes it sound like the revisionists are learning English with you. I'm not sure what you wanted to convey with 'in communication', so I removed it. Maybe you could add a clause like 'and you're pleasant to talk with', if that's what you wanted to say.

Okay, so what about my ddid I do during my time aways?

I have finally started dancing finally!

I sit down every day, so my body feels bad.

But things have changed even afterjust one week after my first dance class!

I’m very shy at the lessons,. I don’t know how to move beautifully, but I think it is a process.

Maybe I can feelwill only feel confident in moving my body only after one-, two-, or three years of these classes.

Then IAlso, I am trying to communicate with guys.

I think you meant that you have been doing this and are currently doing this, so I changed it to the above. If you mean that you'll only communicate with guys once you're confident in your body or in dancing, it would be: 'Then, I will try to communicate with guys'.

I want to find my person for all my lifea lifelong partner and create a family, bu together, but, right now, I can’t find this match.

And I realized that I have become super tiered atof online communication (I speak only about romantic relationships). Now, I have decided not to waste my time and after a few sentences about person arrange a live-meetingI arrange a live meeting after exchanging a few sentences with someone.

There I can see how a person can expresses themselves, how it feels inand I can feel their energy level.

And iIt also shows that how really personhow much a person really wants to do something for you (even if it's just setting a meeting and setting a time for it)


Now
, I am on my way to the country side!

I will be here for the weekends.

I plan to swim in a lake and walk a lot, because there areis amazing fresh air here, comparinged to the air in Moscow.

'Air' is always seen as a singular noun. I guess it's because it's everywhere.

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Great work! I understood almost everything you were saying; I just tried to make it a bit more natural and fixed some tenses.

Dairy 11.07.25


Daiary 11.07.25

'Dairy' is the word for products made with cow's milk.

Hello everyone!


I have disappeared for a long time and I didn’t practice English all this time, but I returned and I’m filled of energy again!


I have disappeared for a long time and I didn’t practice English all this time, but I returned and I’m fiulled of energy again!

I have disappeared for a long time and I didn’haven't practiced English all this time, but I returned and I’am fiulled of energy again!

I’m glad to be here, honestly, you are great partners in learning English and in communication, thank you very much.


I’m glad to be here, honestly, you are great partners infor learning English and in communication, thank you very much.

'Partners in learning English' makes it sound like the revisionists are learning English with you. I'm not sure what you wanted to convey with 'in communication', so I removed it. Maybe you could add a clause like 'and you're pleasant to talk with', if that's what you wanted to say.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But things have changed even after one week after my first dance class!


But things have changed even afterjust one week after my first dance class!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Maybe I can feel my body only after one-two-three years of these classes.


Maybe I can feelwill only feel confident in moving my body only after one-, two-, or three years of these classes.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Okay, what about my days?


Okay, so what about my ddid I do during my time aways?

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have started dancing finally!


I have finally started dancing finally!

I have finally started dancing finally!

I sit down every day, so my body feels bad.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I’m very shy at the lessons, I don’t know how to move beautifully, but I think it is a process.


I’m very shy at the lessons,. I don’t know how to move beautifully, but I think it is a process.

I’m very shy at the lessons,; I don’t know how to move beautifully, but I think it is a process.

Then I try to communicate with guys.


Then IAlso, I am trying to communicate with guys.

I think you meant that you have been doing this and are currently doing this, so I changed it to the above. If you mean that you'll only communicate with guys once you're confident in your body or in dancing, it would be: 'Then, I will try to communicate with guys'.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to find my person for all my life and create family, but now I can’t find this match.


I want to find my person for all my lifea lifelong partner and create a family, bu together, but, right now, I can’t find this match.

I want to find my person for all my life and create a family, but now I can’t find this match.

And I realized that I become super tiered at online communication (I speak only about romantic relationships) Now I decided not to wast my time and after a few sentences about person arrange a live-meeting.


And I realized that I have become super tiered atof online communication (I speak only about romantic relationships). Now, I have decided not to waste my time and after a few sentences about person arrange a live-meetingI arrange a live meeting after exchanging a few sentences with someone.

There I can see how person can express themselves, how it feels in energy level.


There I can see how a person can expresses themselves, how it feels inand I can feel their energy level.

And it also shows that how really person want to do something for you (even just set a meeting and set time for it) Now I am on my way to country side!


And iIt also shows that how really personhow much a person really wants to do something for you (even if it's just setting a meeting and setting a time for it)


Now
, I am on my way to the country side!

I will be here for weekends.


I will be here for the weekends.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I plan to swim in a lake and walk a lot, because there are amazing fresh air comparing the air in Moscow.


I plan to swim in a lake and walk a lot, because there areis amazing fresh air here, comparinged to the air in Moscow.

'Air' is always seen as a singular noun. I guess it's because it's everywhere.

I plan to swim in a lake and walk a lot, because there areis amazing fresh air comparinged to the air in Moscow.

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