Oct. 2, 2022
dairy
2022.10.02
Today is a good day. The weather is sunny and hot,but I enjoy it.
I ride bike along the street.I feel happy! Then I eat some fruit and milk.I think milk is really good! I like it! Later,I go back to the home.Because I have to do my homework,so bad!
I ride my bike along the street.I feel happy!
Later,I go back to themy home.Because I have to do my homework,so bad urgently!
daiary
dairy - 乳品
diary - 日记
2022.10.02
In the US, we would write this 10/2/22.
Today is a good day.
The weather is sunny and hot, but I enjoy it.
Make sure to insert a blank space after each comma and period.
I ride a/my bike along the street. I feel happy!
Then I eat some fruit and drink milk. I think milk is really good!
I like it!
Later, I go back to the home.B, because I have to do my homework,s. So bad!
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Since you wrote this at the end of the day, you could have used past tense, but it’s also perfectly natural to tell a story in the present tense.
Today iwas a good day.
The weather iwas sunny and hot, but I enjoyed it.
I riode my bike along the street.I That feel happyt nice!
Then I eate some fruit and milk. I think milk itastes really good!
Later,I I will go back to the home.B because I have to do my homework,so bad. It's so difficult for me!
Feedback
I changed the verbs to past tense to make the diary sound more natural. I hope it helps you! :)
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The weather is sunny and hot,but I enjoy it. The weather The weather is sunny and hot, but I enjoy it. Make sure to insert a blank space after each comma and period. |
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I ride bike along the street.I feel happy! I r I ride a/my bike along the street. I feel happy! I ride my bike along the street.I feel happy! |
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Then I eat some fruit and milk.I think milk is really good! Then I Then I eat some fruit and drink milk. I think milk is really good! |
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