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666coolboy

July 4, 2022

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Is it bad that I feel jealous that my boyfriend is calling a girl who has told him she likes him romantically?

No, it is normal for being jealous of this girl because you love your boyfriend. I have to point out one thing, you should be alert and your boyfriend may cheat in this relationship. To be honest, I do not know the culture of love in western, but I do know a bad man always keeps in touch with a girl who loves him. A good man always keeps himself from those situations that might make him make mistakes. So be a careful girl!

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Is it bad that I feel jealous that my boyfriend is calling a girl who has told him she likes him romantically?

No, it is normal for beingto be jealous of this girlher because you love your boyfriend.

I have to point out one thing,: you should be alert andbecause your boyfriend may cheat ion this relationshipyou.

To be honest, I do not know the culture ofaround/concerning love in the western, but I do know a bad man always keeps in touch with a girl who loves him.

A good man always keeps himself away from those situations that might make him make mistakes.

So be a careful girl!

What you wrote is grammatically correct, but in english you always say "be careful", and not "be a careful ..."

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666coolboy

July 5, 2022

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Is it bad that I feel jealous that my boyfriend is calling a girl who has told him she likes him romantically?


Is it bad that I feel jealous that my boyfriend is calling a girl who has told him she likes him romantically?

No, it is normal for being jealous of this girl because you love your boyfriend.


No, it is normal for beingto be jealous of this girlher because you love your boyfriend.

I have to point out one thing, you should be alert and your boyfriend may cheat in this relationship.


I have to point out one thing,: you should be alert andbecause your boyfriend may cheat ion this relationshipyou.

To be honest, I do not know the culture of love in western, but I do know a bad man always keeps in touch with a girl who loves him.


To be honest, I do not know the culture ofaround/concerning love in the western, but I do know a bad man always keeps in touch with a girl who loves him.

A good man always keeps himself from those situations that might make him make mistakes.


A good man always keeps himself away from those situations that might make him make mistakes.

So be a careful girl!


So be a careful girl!

What you wrote is grammatically correct, but in english you always say "be careful", and not "be a careful ..."

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