Sept. 18, 2020
Daily (Traveling in Taiwan a year ago)
The 18th of September.
I hadn't really longed for traveling abroad for ages until I visited Taiwan a year ago. Before that, I would rather have spent a fortune in local than afforded for tourist overpriced food and accommodation abroad.
In fact, there were a ton of feelings and experiences I couldn't get it for growth locally. Seeing other people how to treat each other truly and work hard on the street or just a simple place. They were living seriously aroused my heart, as the same human, I desire to strive to live up to myself.
Sometimes we have to venture outside of our comfort zone to grow and you will feel all of the things are worth it.
Your help is really helpful for me.
Ty guys :)
I hadn't really longed for traveling abroad for ages until I visited Taiwan a year ago.
Before that, I would rather have spent a fortune in the local than afforded forarea than spent money on touristy overpriced food for and accommodation abroad.
In fact, there wereTaiwan, I experienced a ton of feelings and experiences I couldn't get it for growth locally.
Seeing other people how to treating each other trulywith kindness and working hard on the street or justs, and just seeing a simpler place (touched me).
I can't really understand exactly what you're trying to say in this sentence, it needs to be a bit more clear. The word "truly" is not correct here, but I don't know what you mean to say instead. This is also not a complete sentence in English.
They wereir living seriously aroustouched my heart, as the samend as a fellow human, I came to desire to strive to live up to myselfmore seriously in life.
This sentence is also confusing, I don't know if I corrected it to what you want to say. I don't know what you mean by "living seriously" or "strive to live up to myself" means exactly, because they are both a bit vague.
Sometimes we have to venture outside of our comfort zone to grow and(as a person), enabling you willto feel all of the things are worth it.more appreciation for things in life
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Once again, "and you will feel all of the things are worth it" is a bit vague. Try to use more specific words in your writing, as it's somewhat difficult for me to figure out exactly what you mean sometimes.
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Daily (Traveling in Taiwan a year ago) |
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The 18th of September. |
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I hadn't really longed for traveling abroad for ages until I visited Taiwan a year ago. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Before that, I would rather have spent a fortune in local than afforded for tourist overpriced food and accommodation abroad. Before that, I would rather have spent a fortune in the local |
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In fact, there were a ton of feelings and experiences I couldn't get it for growth locally. In |
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Seeing other people how to treat each other truly and work hard on the street or just a simple place. Seeing other people I can't really understand exactly what you're trying to say in this sentence, it needs to be a bit more clear. The word "truly" is not correct here, but I don't know what you mean to say instead. This is also not a complete sentence in English. |
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They were living seriously aroused my heart, as the same human, I desire to strive to live up to myself. The This sentence is also confusing, I don't know if I corrected it to what you want to say. I don't know what you mean by "living seriously" or "strive to live up to myself" means exactly, because they are both a bit vague. |
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Sometimes we have to venture outside of our comfort zone to grow and you will feel all of the things are worth it. Sometimes we have to venture outside of our comfort zone to grow |
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