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pancelot

June 14, 2023

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Today I had to work, these days has been very cold like 0ºC so starting the day was a pain. There I analized some grapevine samples to evaluate differents fungus' varieties. Later I got off the work to go to my house. I don't take the bus, I prefer do that by foot. When I got house I just slump over my bed and rested all the evening (benefits of being single with no kids.)

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Today, I had to work, t. These days hait's been very cold, like 0ºC, so starting the day was a pain.

Theren, I analiyzed some grapevine samples to evaluate differents fungus' varieties.

Later, I got off the work to go to myback housme.

I don't take the bus, I prefer dto that by foot.walk home.

When I got houseme, I just slump overed on to my bed and rested all the evening (the benefits of being single and with no kids.).

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I do the same after work, lol! Good job

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pancelot

June 15, 2023

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Thanks for your corrections :D

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Today I had to work, these past few days it has been very cold, like 0ºC, so starting the day was a pain.

ThereAt work I analized some grapevine samples to evaluate differents fungus' varieties.

Or: "different fungi"

Later I got off theleft work to go to my houshome.

To get off work = to give an excuse to not go/to leave earlier than expected

I doidn't take the bus, I prefer dto thatgo by foot.

When I got houseme, I just slump overed on my bed and rested all the evening (benefits of being single with no kids.).

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Note the difference between "house" and "home".

Great job!

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pancelot

June 15, 2023

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Thanks for your corrections :D I learned how to use some words.

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Today I had to work, these days has been very cold like 0ºC so starting the day was a pain.


Today I had to work, these past few days it has been very cold, like 0ºC, so starting the day was a pain.

Today, I had to work, t. These days hait's been very cold, like 0ºC, so starting the day was a pain.

There I analized some grapevine samples to evaluate differents fungus' varieties.


ThereAt work I analized some grapevine samples to evaluate differents fungus' varieties.

Or: "different fungi"

Theren, I analiyzed some grapevine samples to evaluate differents fungus' varieties.

Later I got off the work to go to my house.


Later I got off theleft work to go to my houshome.

To get off work = to give an excuse to not go/to leave earlier than expected

Later, I got off the work to go to myback housme.

I don't take the bus, I prefer do that by foot.


I doidn't take the bus, I prefer dto thatgo by foot.

I don't take the bus, I prefer dto that by foot.walk home.

When I got house I just slump over my bed and rested all the evening (benefits of being single with no kids.)


When I got houseme, I just slump overed on my bed and rested all the evening (benefits of being single with no kids.).

When I got houseme, I just slump overed on to my bed and rested all the evening (the benefits of being single and with no kids.).

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