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pancelot

June 18, 2023

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Yesterday was a good day, because I received "kudos" when I showed the advance of my thesis to my Professor. Despite the praise I wasn't very happy because I was expecting some corrections, or some guidance. That's because I consider I'm just doing the basics and we could make a better analysis about the data.
Today was a chill day. In the morning I attended to my German lection, that was very boring because we just studied grammar. I prefer to watch a tv show and analyze sentences.

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Yesterday was a good day, because I received "kudos" when I showed thean advance of my thesis to my Professor.

"The" is used for a specific thing. Since you're talking about a general thing, use "a". If you were Einstein talking about his thesis on the theory of relativity, for emphasis, you could say "the thesis by Einstein" but in general you'd say " a thesis" and this point stands for most things. "A" is used in the general sense, "the" is only used when the reader knows exactly which thing you are referring to. Hope that helps

Despite the praise I wasn't very happy because I was expecting some corrections, or some guidance.

That's because I consider I'm just doingwhat I'm doing to be just the basics and we could make a better analysis about the data.

I feel like you are missing a point in this sentence. It's hard for me to understand what you're trying to say.

Today was a chill day.

In the morning I attended to my German lection, thature, which was very boring because we just studied grammar.

I prefer to watch a tv show and analyze sentences.

Daily text 2

Yesterday was a good day, because I received "kudos" when I showed the advancedraft of my thesis to my Pprofessor.

Despite the praise, I wasn't very happy because I was expecting some corrections, or some guidance.

That's because I considerthink I'm just doing the basicsre minimum and we could make a better analysis aboutof the data.

"Bare minimum" is more idiomatic. Just "minimum" or "minimum necessary" could also work and would be a little less harsh.

Today was a chill day.

In the morning I attended to my German lection, thasson. It was very boring because we just studied grammar.

I prefer to watch a tving a [TV] show and analyze ing sentences.

Some native speakers would also be fine with "tv."

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pancelot

June 21, 2023

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Thanks for your help :D

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Yesterday was a good day, because I received "kudos" when I showed the advance of my thesis to my Professor.


Yesterday was a good day, because I received "kudos" when I showed the advancedraft of my thesis to my Pprofessor.

Yesterday was a good day, because I received "kudos" when I showed thean advance of my thesis to my Professor.

"The" is used for a specific thing. Since you're talking about a general thing, use "a". If you were Einstein talking about his thesis on the theory of relativity, for emphasis, you could say "the thesis by Einstein" but in general you'd say " a thesis" and this point stands for most things. "A" is used in the general sense, "the" is only used when the reader knows exactly which thing you are referring to. Hope that helps

Despite the praise I wasn't very happy because I was expecting some corrections, or some guidance.


Despite the praise, I wasn't very happy because I was expecting some corrections, or some guidance.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That's because I consider I'm just doing the basics and we could make a better analysis about the data.


That's because I considerthink I'm just doing the basicsre minimum and we could make a better analysis aboutof the data.

"Bare minimum" is more idiomatic. Just "minimum" or "minimum necessary" could also work and would be a little less harsh.

That's because I consider I'm just doingwhat I'm doing to be just the basics and we could make a better analysis about the data.

I feel like you are missing a point in this sentence. It's hard for me to understand what you're trying to say.

Today was a chill day.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In the morning I attended to my German lection, that was very boring because we just studied grammar.


In the morning I attended to my German lection, thasson. It was very boring because we just studied grammar.

In the morning I attended to my German lection, thature, which was very boring because we just studied grammar.

I prefer to watch a tv show and analyze sentences.


I prefer to watch a tving a [TV] show and analyze ing sentences.

Some native speakers would also be fine with "tv."

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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