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pancelot

June 15, 2023

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Today was my first day starting (again) with a To-Do apps in order to organize my day. I have notice that as I get older the differents techniques that I learned when I was younger have a more powerful impact on me. For instance: Studying techniques, Time management etc. My theory is that younger people has other interest, the prefer hanging out with friends than develop themselves . But that's not their fault, I think that's because their Brain is still developing. I mean you can urge to study more or be a better person, but the chemichals in your brain are crazy and don't let you to focus in important things. Sometimes I'd liked to be more mature back then but well, that's the beauty of life.

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Today was my first day starting (again) with a To-Do apps in order to organize my day.

You used "a" so no "s" at the end

I have noticed that as I get older the differents techniques that I learned when I was younger have a more powerful impact on me.

For instance: Studying techniques, Time management etc.

My theory is that younger people hasve other interests, they prefer hanging out with friends thanover developing themselves .

But that's not their fault, I think that's because their Brain is still developing.

I mean you can urge them to study more or be a better person, but the chemichals in youtheir brains are crazy and don't let you tothem focus ion important things.

I'm not who the "subject" of this sentence it, meaning who we are talking about. It seems like you should be talking about kids in general, so i used they.

Sometimes I'd liked to behave been more mature back then but well, that's the beauty of life.

Había estado i believe is what you're saying so have been

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pancelot

June 18, 2023

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Thanks for your corrections. Especially your help in spanish :D

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Today was my first day starting (again) withto use a To-Do apps in order to organize my day.

I have noticed that as I get older, the differents techniques that I learned when I was younger have a more powerful impact on me.

For instance: Sexample, studying techniques, Ttime management etc.

My theory is that younger people hasve other interests, they prefer hanging out with their friends than developing themselves .

But that's not their fault, I think that's because their Bbrain is still developing.

I mean you can get the urge to study more or to be a better person, but the chemichals in your brain are crazy and don't let you to focus ion important things.

Sometimes I'd liked to be think that I'd have liked to have been more mature back then, but well, that's the beauty of life.

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pancelot

June 18, 2023

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Thanks for your corrections. It helps me a lot.

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Today was my first day starting (again) with a To-Do apps in order to organize my day.


Today was my first day starting (again) withto use a To-Do apps in order to organize my day.

Today was my first day starting (again) with a To-Do apps in order to organize my day.

You used "a" so no "s" at the end

I have notice that as I get older the differents techniques that I learned when I was younger have a more powerful impact on me.


I have noticed that as I get older, the differents techniques that I learned when I was younger have a more powerful impact on me.

I have noticed that as I get older the differents techniques that I learned when I was younger have a more powerful impact on me.

For instance: Studying techniques, Time management etc.


For instance: Sexample, studying techniques, Ttime management etc.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My theory is that younger people has other interest, the prefer hanging out with friends than develop themselves .


My theory is that younger people hasve other interests, they prefer hanging out with their friends than developing themselves .

My theory is that younger people hasve other interests, they prefer hanging out with friends thanover developing themselves .

But that's not their fault, I think that's because their Brain is still developing.


But that's not their fault, I think that's because their Bbrain is still developing.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I mean you can urge to study more or be a better person, but the chemichals in your brain are crazy and don't let you to focus in important things.


I mean you can get the urge to study more or to be a better person, but the chemichals in your brain are crazy and don't let you to focus ion important things.

I mean you can urge them to study more or be a better person, but the chemichals in youtheir brains are crazy and don't let you tothem focus ion important things.

I'm not who the "subject" of this sentence it, meaning who we are talking about. It seems like you should be talking about kids in general, so i used they.

Sometimes I'd liked to be more mature back then but well, that's the beauty of life.


Sometimes I'd liked to be think that I'd have liked to have been more mature back then, but well, that's the beauty of life.

Sometimes I'd liked to behave been more mature back then but well, that's the beauty of life.

Había estado i believe is what you're saying so have been

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