March 8, 2025
On weekdays, I wake up at 7 am, after a quick wash and snack breakfast, mostly is an egg, a bottle of warm milk boiled with oatmeal and a piece of bread. Around 20 minutes later, I drive to school. If there were no traffic jams, I would arrive in classroom at around 7:40. In the afternoon, I generally leave school at 4:00 pm. On Saturdays and Sundays are great days for me. I sleep more and hang out with my friends or family.
每日生活
工作日, 我7点起床,快速洗漱和来个早餐,大多情况下是一个鸡蛋,加麦片的热牛奶和一片面包。20分钟后,我开车到学校。如果不堵车,我会在7:40 到教室。下午,我一般4点离校。周六和周日对我来说很重要,我会水的更久,并与朋友或家人出去闲逛。
Daily Routine
On weekdays, I wake up at 7 am,. after a quick wash and snack for breakfast, mostly isusually an egg, a bottle of warm milk boiled with oatmeal and a piece of bread.
Around 20 minutes later, I drive to school.
if you drive with your own car, then this is correct. if you ride on a bus/car with someone else driving it, it would be “ Around 20 minutes later, I take a ride to school.”
If there were no traffic jams, I would arrive in the classroom at around 7:40.
In the afternoon, I generally leave school at 4:00 pm.
On Saturdays and Sundays are great days for me.
I sleep more and hang out with my friends or family.
Daily Routine
On weekdays, I wake up at 7 am, a.m. After a quick wash and snack, I have breakfast, mostly is an egg, a bottle of warm milk boiled with oatmealwhich is often an egg, oatmeal cooked in milk, and a piece of bread.
1. There are two ways to write "ante meridiem": either a.m. or AM. I personally write 7 AM in my own casual writing, but 7 a.m. is recommended by most style guides.
2. I wasn't certain whether the oat/milk component of your breakfast is a beverage made mostly of milk or a food made mostly of oats. My suggestion assumes you are referring to something more like food. Cereal grains (e.g. oats) boiled in water or milk can also be called "porridge" in English.
Around 20 minutes later, I drive to school.
If there weare no traffic jams, I would arrive inat my classroom at around 7:40 a.m.
1. The simple present tense is used for writing about repeated actions and habits. Since you are describing your usual routine, continue writing in present tense in this sentence.
2. Here's a potentially helpful guideline: Use "arrive in" when your destination is a town, city, or country. Use "arrive at" when your destination is a building or a part of a building.
In the afternoon, I generally leave school at 4:00 p.m.
On Saturdays and Sundays are great days for me.
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Great writing! I find it really difficult to wake up early during the week. I love sleeping late on the weekends!
ALSO POSSIBLE: My Daily Routine
On weekdays, I usually wake up at 7 am, after a quick wash and have a snack breakfast, mostlywhich is often is an egg, a bottle of warm milk boiled with oatmeal and a piece of bread.
Around 20 minutes later, I drive to school.
If there were no traffic jams, I would arrive inreach my classroom at around 7:40.
In the afternoon, I generally leave school at 4:00 pm.
I sleep more and hang out with my friends or family.
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Sounds nice!
Daily Routine
On weekdays, I wake up at 7 am. About 20 minutes later, after a quick wash and sna(quick) breakfast, mostly is—usually an egg, (a bottle of) warm milk boiled with oatmeal and a piece of bread.—I drive to school.
Your original wording means that you wash and have breakfast BEFORE you wake up. :-))
Also, “a bottle of warm milk boiled with oatmeal” means that the oatmeal and milk are served in the bottle. You don’t mention the bottle in your Chinese text, so I’m not sure what you mean.
If there were no traffic jams, I would arrive in the classroom at around 7:40.
In the afternoon, I generally leave school at 4:00 pm.
On Saturdays and Sundays are great days for me.
I sleep more and hang out with my friends or family.
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Are you a student at the school, or a teacher?
On weekdays, I wake up at 7 am, after a quick wash and snacka breakfast, snack, which is mostly is an egg, a bottle of warm milk boiled with oatmeal and a piece of bread.
If there were noaren’t any traffic jams, I would arrive in classroom at around 7:40.
On Saturdays and Sundays are great days for me.
Daily Routine
On weekdays, I wake up at 7 am, a. After a quick wash and snackI have a breakfast snack , mostly is an egg, a bottle of warm milk boiled with oatmeal and a piece of bread.
Around 20 minutes later, I drive to school.
If there weare no traffic jams, I wouldusually arrive in the classroom at around 7:40.
When you are talking about regular routines, we would normally use the present tense.
In the afternoon, I generally leave school at 4:00 pm.
On Saturdays and Sundays are great days for me.
I sleep more and hang out with my friends or family.
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Well done. I only corrected a few minor mistakes. Enjoy the weekend!
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On Saturdays and Sundays are great days for me.
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