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tommy

Aug. 16, 2020

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I have tried to keep on writing my diary many times, but I can't do it.
I always described negative feelings, such as regretting to break up with my girlfriend, and deemed it meaningless since nobody reads it.
Fortunately, someone would read my diary here and furthermore it is useful for learning English.
However, there are many people who have posted self-introduction once and never posted again (return?) .
It is difficult for everyone to make something daily routine (Would "keep on something" be better?).


これまで何度も日記を続けようと頑張ってきたが、一度も続いたことはなかった。過去を振り返ると必ず後悔の念ばかり綴ってしまうし、誰も見ない文章に意味を見出せなかった。その点、ここでは誰かが読んでくれるし英語学習の役に立っている。過去のポストをさかのぼってみると、一度自己紹介しただけで二度と戻ってこない人がたくさんいるようだ。何かを習慣化するのは難しい。

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However, there are many people who have posted self-introduction onceonce to introduce themselves and never posted again (return?) .

"... and never returned." would also be fine. "self-introduction" is not a normal English phrase as it is in Japanese. I would say it like this.

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Good job! I have enjoyed reading yours and others even if I am not up to the challenge of posting everyday.

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I have tried to keep on writing mya diary for many times, but I can't do it.

I always described negative feelings, such as regretting tomy break up with my girlfriend, and deemed it meaningless since nobody reads it.

Fortunately, someone wouldill read my diary here and furthermore it is useful for learning English.

However, there are many people who have posted a self-introduction once and never posted again (return?) .

It is difficult for everanyone to make somethingkeep a daily routine (Would "keep on something" be better? ).

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Keep a dairy is another way for saying "write regularly in a diary". You can also "keep a daily routine", "keep a secret", "keep a lookout for" etc...

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I've always described negative feelings, such as regretting to breaking up with my girlfriend, and deemed it meaningless since nobody reads it.

Fortunately, someone wouldill read my diary here, and furthermore it is useful for learning English.

However, there are many people who have posted their self-introduction once and never posted again (return?) .

Both ways you wrote it make sense, it could be either:
"and never posted again"
or
"and never returned"

It is difficult for everyone to make something a daily routine (Would "keep on something" be better? ).

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Keep up the good work!

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I have tried to keep onup writing in my diary many times, but I can't do it.

I always described negative feelings, such as regretting tohe break up with my girlfriend, and deemed it meaningless since nobody reads it.

However, there are many people who have posted a self-introduction once and never posted again (return?) .

Either works. You could say “posted a self introduction once and never posted again” or “posted a self introduction once and never returned”.

It is difficult for everyonpeople to make something a daily routine (Would "keep on something" be better? ).

“It is difficult for people to make something a daily routine” isn’t the best way to say if.

Using the word “people” is better than “everyone” as everyone of course implies every person which in this context doesn’t read very well as of course there are people who don’t have that struggle.

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Very well done! Your English is very good and you’ve conveyed your emotions well. I’m sorry to hear about your break up and I hope you feel better soon.

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tommy

Aug. 16, 2020

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Thank you for your feedback. Don't worry. I broke up two years and a half ago so that I don't feel bad now:)

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I have tried to keep on writing my diary many times, but I can't do it.


I have tried to keep onup writing in my diary many times, but I can't do it.

I have tried to keep on writing mya diary for many times, but I can't do it.

I always described negative feelings, such as regretting to break up with my girlfriend, and deemed it meaningless since nobody reads it.


I always described negative feelings, such as regretting tohe break up with my girlfriend, and deemed it meaningless since nobody reads it.

I've always described negative feelings, such as regretting to breaking up with my girlfriend, and deemed it meaningless since nobody reads it.

I always described negative feelings, such as regretting tomy break up with my girlfriend, and deemed it meaningless since nobody reads it.

Fortunately, someone would read my diary here and furthermore it is useful for learning English.


Fortunately, someone wouldill read my diary here, and furthermore it is useful for learning English.

Fortunately, someone wouldill read my diary here and furthermore it is useful for learning English.

However, there are many people who have posted self-introduction once and never posted again (return?) .


However, there are many people who have posted a self-introduction once and never posted again (return?) .

Either works. You could say “posted a self introduction once and never posted again” or “posted a self introduction once and never returned”.

However, there are many people who have posted their self-introduction once and never posted again (return?) .

Both ways you wrote it make sense, it could be either: "and never posted again" or "and never returned"

However, there are many people who have posted a self-introduction once and never posted again (return?) .

However, there are many people who have posted self-introduction onceonce to introduce themselves and never posted again (return?) .

"... and never returned." would also be fine. "self-introduction" is not a normal English phrase as it is in Japanese. I would say it like this.

It is difficult for everyone to make something daily routine (Would "keep on something" be better? ).


It is difficult for everyonpeople to make something a daily routine (Would "keep on something" be better? ).

“It is difficult for people to make something a daily routine” isn’t the best way to say if. Using the word “people” is better than “everyone” as everyone of course implies every person which in this context doesn’t read very well as of course there are people who don’t have that struggle.

It is difficult for everyone to make something a daily routine (Would "keep on something" be better? ).

It is difficult for everanyone to make somethingkeep a daily routine (Would "keep on something" be better? ).

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