Oct. 21, 2025
Daily - Oct 10/21/2025
Hi guys, i'm starting to study English, i know is basic. Today is special, because I am focused studying English and learning.
Today I come tell you a litte routine, I work, like play videogames, like to fight (Jiu jitsu and muay thai) and bodybuilding.
Daily Entry - Oct 10/21/2025
“Daily” by itself doesn’t make sense, because you need a noun or verb to express what is happening daily, or what you are doing daily.
Hi guys, i'I’m starting to study English, i. I know my English is basic.
Today is special, because I am focused on studying English and learning.
“And learning” is a bit repetitive.
Today I coame to tell you a little routine,. I work, I like to play video games, I like to fight (Jjiu jitsu and muay thai) and I like bodybuilding.
“Jiu jitsu” should not be capitalized unless it appears at the beginning of a sentence. “Came” is in past tense. Imagine you walk up to a friend and say, “today I came to tell you a little routine”, implying you’ve already taken the steps to come to them. There is no more coming towards your friend. You already “came” to them.
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Daily Entry- Oct 10/21/2025
Hi guys, iI'm starting to study English, i. I know isthe basics.
Today is special, because I am focused on studying English and learning English.
Today, I coame to tell you a little about my routine,. I work, I like playing video games, I like to fighting (Jiu jitsu and muay thai) and I like bodybuilding.
Daily Entry - Oct 10/21/2025
"Daily" on its own doesn't really mean anything here. It's an adjective and should modify a noun like "entry".
Hi guys, iI'm starting to study English, iI know isthe basics.
When used as a pronoun, "I" is always capitalised.
Today is special, because I am focused on studying English and learning.
The phrase is "focus on (something)".
Today I have come to tell you a litte about my routine,. I work, and like playing videogames, like to fightpracticing martial arts (Jjiu -jitsu and muay thai) and bodybuilding.
(1) "Have come" is known as the present perfect tense. It is used when the present moment is the result of a past event. I have provided some examples of this below, but don't worry if you don't understand it at this stage. You will eventually :)
> I came (past event) ⇒ I have come (present moment)
> I ate (past event) ⇒ I have eaten (present moment)
> I walked (past event) ⇒ I have walked (present moment)
(2) I have broken ("have broken" is also in the present perfect tense!) your sentence into two so that it sounds more natural.
(3) "Fight" sounds a little violent, so I've replaced it with "practice".
(4) I have changed the second half of your sentence so that all the verbs are in the same form ("playing", "practicing", "bodybuilding"). It will sound more natural this way.
(5) "Jiu-jitsu" doesn't have to be capitalised.
Hi guys, i'm starting to study English, iI know isthe basics.
Today is special, because I am focused on studying English and learning.
to focus on = a phrasal verb that means to put all of your attention on someone or something.
Today I have come to tell you a little bit about my routine,. I work, I like playing video games, like to fightpracticing martial arts (Jiu jitsu and muay thai) and bodybuilding.
Eventually, you will learn about present perfect tense (I have finished, you have finished, they have finished, etc.)
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Good luck with your English and keep writing!
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Today is special, because I am focused studying English and learning. Today is special, because I am focused on studying English and learning. to focus on = a phrasal verb that means to put all of your attention on someone or something. Today is special, because I am focused on studying English and learning. The phrase is "focus on (something)". Today is special Today is special, because I am focused on studying English “And learning” is a bit repetitive. |
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Today I come tell you a litte routine, I work, like play videogames, like to fight (Jiu jitsu and muay thai) and bodybuilding. Today I have come to tell you a little bit about my routine Eventually, you will learn about present perfect tense (I have finished, you have finished, they have finished, etc.) Today I have come to tell you a litte about my routine (1) "Have come" is known as the present perfect tense. It is used when the present moment is the result of a past event. I have provided some examples of this below, but don't worry if you don't understand it at this stage. You will eventually :) > I came (past event) ⇒ I have come (present moment) > I ate (past event) ⇒ I have eaten (present moment) > I walked (past event) ⇒ I have walked (present moment) (2) I have broken ("have broken" is also in the present perfect tense!) your sentence into two so that it sounds more natural. (3) "Fight" sounds a little violent, so I've replaced it with "practice". (4) I have changed the second half of your sentence so that all the verbs are in the same form ("playing", "practicing", "bodybuilding"). It will sound more natural this way. (5) "Jiu-jitsu" doesn't have to be capitalised. Today, I c Today I c “Jiu jitsu” should not be capitalized unless it appears at the beginning of a sentence. “Came” is in past tense. Imagine you walk up to a friend and say, “today I came to tell you a little routine”, implying you’ve already taken the steps to come to them. There is no more coming towards your friend. You already “came” to them. |
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