Jan. 26, 2023
Daily Life - Talking about yourself
My name's Caroline, I have twenty-six. I'm from Mexico but now I'm living in Spain. I'm here with my family. I've got two sisters, one cousin, my uncle and my aunt. We came here five years ago because my uncles thought that we could be safer here and with more opportunities for look a job.
At the moment, we are fine; my uncles and I are working, one of my sisters is studying at university and my cousin and my other sister are studying at high school.
Spain is a wonderful country. I love its history, its food and its places. The people is nice too. They are very passionate. They talking hard, love to eat, to drink, to walk in the evening... I do it too.
I love this country although it's not perfect, it's not too safe and the payment tax is too much. It's probably that I will go to another country for make money for the studies of my sisters. I will miss Spain, like now I miss Mexico. Both countries are really beautiful and I love both
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I love its history, its food and its places.
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I will miss Spain, like I now I miss Mexico.
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Both countries are really beautiful and I love both.
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Well done I really enjoyed reading this.
Jan. 31, 2023
Thank you very much
My name's Caroline, I haveam twenty-six.
I've got two sisters, one cousin, my uncle, and my aunt.
We came here five years ago because my uncles thought that we could be safer here and withhave more opportunities forto look for a job.
At the moment, we are fine; my uncles and I are working, one of my sisters is studying at university, and my cousin and my other sister are studying at high school.
The people isare nice too.
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I love this country, although it's not perfect,: it's not too safe enough, and the paymentsales tax is too much.
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It's probablye that I will go to another country forto make money for the studies ofso my sisters can study.
I will miss Spain, just like now I miss Mexico now.
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Nice work!!
Jan. 31, 2023
thanks :)
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I'm from Mexico but now I'm living in Spain. I'm from Mexico but now I More natural |
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We came here five years ago because my uncles thought that we could be safer here and with more opportunities for look a job. We came here five years ago because my uncles thought that we could be safer here and We came here five years ago because my uncles thought that we |
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At the moment, we are fine; my uncles and I are working, one of my sisters is studying at university and my cousin and my other sister are studying at high school. At the moment, we are fine; my uncles and I are working, one of my sisters is studying at university, and my cousin and my other sister are studying at high school. At the moment, we are fine; my uncles and I are working, one of my sisters is studying at university and my cousin and my other sister are st |
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