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brytcelf

Feb. 10, 2023

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Daily Life - Routine

Hi, I'm here again. It's difficult to learn a new lenguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course or any app, ok, that's not really true, I have a free course that I found in Internet and an app for vocabulary, but it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on Youtube for understand better. So, according to this free course, today I should write about my daily life.

Let's go:
I get up at half past six. After take a shower I do my breakfast and go to work. I start to work at nine and finish at half past four. I had lunch at 1:00.
After work, I come home and eat something fast, a pasta, a sandwich or leftovers from last night dinner. At 6:00 pm, I start to study english for an hour and a half.
Then, I do exercise, take another shower, listen to music or podcasts ( lately, I listen this just in english or french, because I need to learn english and I don't want to forget the little bit I learn of french).
Finally, I go to sleep about eleven.
Yes, I think It's a relax routine...
Thanks for any correction, I read you :D

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It's difficult to learn a new leanguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course, or any app, ok. Okay, that's not really true, I have a free course that I found inon the Internet and an app for vocabulary, but it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on YoutTube forto understand better.

After takeing a shower, I dohave my breakfast and go to work.

I start to working at nine and finish at half past four.

I hadve lunch at 1:00.

Changing to present tense here to match the previous sentence

After work, I come home and eat something fast, a like pasta, a sandwich, or leftovers from lastthe previous night's dinner.

Speaking about a generalization/habit, it makes more sense to say "the previous night's dinner" instead of "last night's dinner"

At 6:00 pm, I start to study eing English for an hour and a half.

Then, I do exercise, take another shower, and listen to music or podcasts ( lately, I listen thiso them just in eEnglish or fFrench, because I need to learn eEnglish and I don't want to forget the little bit I learned of fFrench).

Finally, I go to sleep at about eleven.

Yes, I think Iit's a relaxing routine...

Thanks for any corrections, I will read youthem :D

No problem!

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Good job, keep it up

My Daily Life - Routine

This is more how we'd say and write it in the US.

Hi, I'm here again.

It's difficult to learn a new leanguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course or any app, ok. Okay, that's not really true,. I haveusing a free course that I found inon the Internet and an app for vocabulary, but it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on Youtube foto get a better understand bettering.

Good for you!

So, according to this free course, today I should write about my daily lifroutine.

Let's go:.

I get up at half past six.

AfterThen I take a shower I do, eat my breakfast and go to work.

I start to work at nine9am and finish at half past four4:30pm.

I hadve lunch at 1:00pm.

After work, I come home and eat something fast, a like pasta, a sandwich or leftovers from last night's dinner.

At 6:00 pm, I start to study eEnglish for an hour and a half.

I think this is what's needed to really learn a language.

Then, I do exercises, take another shower, and listen to music or podcasts. ( lLately, I listen thio things just in eEnglish or fFrench, because I need to learn eEnglish and I don't want to forget the little bit I learn of frenchof French I've learned).

or

Then, I exercise, take another shower, and listen to music or podcasts. (Lately, I listen to things just in English or French, because I need to learn English and I don't want to forget the little bit of French I've learned).

Finally, I go to sleep abrout elevennd 11pm.

Yes, I think It's a relaxing routine...

Thanks for any correction,. I'll read yours, too. :D

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Very nice! Good work!

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brytcelf

Feb. 13, 2023

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Thank you ^-^

Daily Life - Routine

Hi, I'm here again.

It's difficult to learn a new leanguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course or any app, okpp. OK, that's not really true, I have a free course that I found ion the Internet and an app for vocabulary, but. However, it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on Youtube forto understand better.

When you use "any" before "class", you don't need to use it with the other items on the list.
I have split this into 3 sentences as I think it's too long otherwise.
"to understand" - the correct preposition.

So, according to this free course, today I should write about my daily life.

Let's go:

I get up at half past six.

After I take a shower, I doeat my breakfast and go to work.

Alternative: After TAKING a shower, I eat my breakfast and go to work.

I start to work at nine and finish at half past four.

I hadve lunch at 1:00.

"had" is the past tense of "have"

After work, I come home and eat something fast, a pasta, a sandwich or leftovers from last night's dinner.

"Pasta" is non-countable

At 6:00 pm, I (start to) study english for an hour and a half.

"start to" isn't wrong, but it is unnecessary

Then, I do exercise, take another shower, and listen to music or podcasts ( l. Lately, I listen thishave been listening to these just in eEnglish or fFrench, because I need to learn eEnglish and I don't want to forget the little bit I learn of fFrench) that I learned.

In English, you listen TO something.
Languages always have a capital letter.

Finally, I go to sleep at about eleven.

Alternative: Finally, I go to sleep around eleven.

Yes, I think Iit's a relaxing routine...

Thanks for any corrections, I will read youthem :D

Feedback

Good luck on your English learning journey! Hope you have lots of fun :)

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brytcelf

Feb. 10, 2023

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Thank you :))

Daily Life - Routine

Hi, I'm here again.

It's difficult to learn a new leanguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course, or any app, ok, that's not realpp. It's actually not entirely true, because I have a free course that I found ion the Internet and an app for vocabulary, but. However, it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on Youtube forto understand better.

So, according to this free course, today I should write about my daily life.

Let's go:

I get up at half past six.

After take a shower I dohave my breakfast and go to work.

I start to work at nine and finish at half past four.

I hadve lunch at 1:00.

After work, I come home and eat something fast, a pasta, a sandwich, or leftovers from last night's dinner.

At 6:00 pm, I start to study eEnglish for an hour and a half.

Then, I do exercise, take another shower, listen to music or podcasts ( lately, I listen thishave been listening in just in eEnglish or fFrench, because I need to learn eEnglish and I don't want to forget the little bit I learn of fFrench I have learned).

Finally, I go to sleep at about eleven.

Yes, I think It's a relaxing routine...

Thanks for any correction, I read youthem. :D

brytcelf's avatar
brytcelf

Feb. 10, 2023

0

thank you

Daily Life - Routine


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My Daily Life - Routine

This is more how we'd say and write it in the US.

Hi, I'm here again.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's difficult to learn a new lenguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course or any app, ok, that's not really true, I have a free course that I found in Internet and an app for vocabulary, but it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on Youtube for understand better.


It's difficult to learn a new leanguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course, or any app, ok, that's not realpp. It's actually not entirely true, because I have a free course that I found ion the Internet and an app for vocabulary, but. However, it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on Youtube forto understand better.

It's difficult to learn a new leanguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course or any app, okpp. OK, that's not really true, I have a free course that I found ion the Internet and an app for vocabulary, but. However, it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on Youtube forto understand better.

When you use "any" before "class", you don't need to use it with the other items on the list. I have split this into 3 sentences as I think it's too long otherwise. "to understand" - the correct preposition.

It's difficult to learn a new leanguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course or any app, ok. Okay, that's not really true,. I haveusing a free course that I found inon the Internet and an app for vocabulary, but it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on Youtube foto get a better understand bettering.

Good for you!

It's difficult to learn a new leanguage because I'm learning alone, without any class, any course, or any app, ok. Okay, that's not really true, I have a free course that I found inon the Internet and an app for vocabulary, but it's not complete, so I need to watch videos on YoutTube forto understand better.

So, according to this free course, today I should write about my daily life.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So, according to this free course, today I should write about my daily lifroutine.

Let's go:


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Let's go:.

I get up at half past six.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After take a shower I do my breakfast and go to work.


After take a shower I dohave my breakfast and go to work.

After I take a shower, I doeat my breakfast and go to work.

Alternative: After TAKING a shower, I eat my breakfast and go to work.

AfterThen I take a shower I do, eat my breakfast and go to work.

After takeing a shower, I dohave my breakfast and go to work.

I start to work at nine and finish at half past four.


I start to work at nine and finish at half past four.

I start to work at nine and finish at half past four.

I start to work at nine9am and finish at half past four4:30pm.

I start to working at nine and finish at half past four.

I had lunch at 1:00.


I hadve lunch at 1:00.

I hadve lunch at 1:00.

"had" is the past tense of "have"

I hadve lunch at 1:00pm.

I hadve lunch at 1:00.

Changing to present tense here to match the previous sentence

After work, I come home and eat something fast, a pasta, a sandwich or leftovers from last night dinner.


After work, I come home and eat something fast, a pasta, a sandwich, or leftovers from last night's dinner.

After work, I come home and eat something fast, a pasta, a sandwich or leftovers from last night's dinner.

"Pasta" is non-countable

After work, I come home and eat something fast, a like pasta, a sandwich or leftovers from last night's dinner.

After work, I come home and eat something fast, a like pasta, a sandwich, or leftovers from lastthe previous night's dinner.

Speaking about a generalization/habit, it makes more sense to say "the previous night's dinner" instead of "last night's dinner"

At 6:00 pm, I start to study english for an hour and a half.


At 6:00 pm, I start to study eEnglish for an hour and a half.

At 6:00 pm, I (start to) study english for an hour and a half.

"start to" isn't wrong, but it is unnecessary

At 6:00 pm, I start to study eEnglish for an hour and a half.

I think this is what's needed to really learn a language.

At 6:00 pm, I start to study eing English for an hour and a half.

Then, I do exercise, take another shower, listen to music or podcasts ( lately, I listen this just in english or french, because I need to learn english and I don't want to forget the little bit I learn of french).


Then, I do exercise, take another shower, listen to music or podcasts ( lately, I listen thishave been listening in just in eEnglish or fFrench, because I need to learn eEnglish and I don't want to forget the little bit I learn of fFrench I have learned).

Then, I do exercise, take another shower, and listen to music or podcasts ( l. Lately, I listen thishave been listening to these just in eEnglish or fFrench, because I need to learn eEnglish and I don't want to forget the little bit I learn of fFrench) that I learned.

In English, you listen TO something. Languages always have a capital letter.

Then, I do exercises, take another shower, and listen to music or podcasts. ( lLately, I listen thio things just in eEnglish or fFrench, because I need to learn eEnglish and I don't want to forget the little bit I learn of frenchof French I've learned).

or Then, I exercise, take another shower, and listen to music or podcasts. (Lately, I listen to things just in English or French, because I need to learn English and I don't want to forget the little bit of French I've learned).

Then, I do exercise, take another shower, and listen to music or podcasts ( lately, I listen thiso them just in eEnglish or fFrench, because I need to learn eEnglish and I don't want to forget the little bit I learned of fFrench).

Finally, I go to sleep about eleven.


Finally, I go to sleep at about eleven.

Finally, I go to sleep at about eleven.

Alternative: Finally, I go to sleep around eleven.

Finally, I go to sleep abrout elevennd 11pm.

Finally, I go to sleep at about eleven.

Yes, I think It's a relax routine...


Yes, I think It's a relaxing routine...

Yes, I think Iit's a relaxing routine...

Yes, I think It's a relaxing routine...

Yes, I think Iit's a relaxing routine...

Thanks for any correction, I read you :D


Thanks for any correction, I read youthem. :D

Thanks for any corrections, I will read youthem :D

Thanks for any correction,. I'll read yours, too. :D

Thanks for any corrections, I will read youthem :D

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