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bobjohn

Aug. 19, 2025

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Daily Life: Part 8

lalala, I'm in the mood! Why do i look like so great? The answer is I have addicted to serious TV. Do you like serious TV? What type of TV is your favorite. Just let me know, pal. Since I began watching TV, I got enormous raw words that I had never seen to improve my explanation. I love that context in TV. Every sense, sentence, and plot is perfect! But someone says that not a good idea to enhance my English skills? Because they told me that I would waste so much time on the stories instead studying. I just want to listen more people who posts here. Just feel free to contact me! Put your ideas on the feedback sqaure.

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Daily Life: Part 8

lLalala, I'm in thea great mood!

I have to tell you that when someone says "I'm in the mood" it means in the mood for sex, haha

Why do i look likeI sound so great?

"Look great" always means about physical appearance - someone looking stylish or healthy. For being in a great mood, use "sound great."

The answer is I havethat I'm addicted to serious TV.

What do you mean by "serious TV"? This wouldn't mean anything to me. Do you mean a certain genre, like drama series?

Do you like serious TV?

What type of TV is your favorite.?

This is a question

Just let me know, pal.

Since I began watching TV, I got enormous raw've learned a ton of words that I had've never seen before to improve my explanationvocabulary.

"Enormous" is used to describe the size of one thing, but here you want to use a descriptor that means many countable things (because words are countable, not one thing) => "a ton of"

Did you mean "new" instead of "raw"? If so, no need to mention that since it is already understood by the next part "... that I've never seen before"

Better to say "vocabulary," it's inherent that you can explain yourself better with an increased vocabulary

I love thatving context in TV shows.

Every senseemotion/feeling, sentence, and plot is perfect!

"Sense" doesn't work here but I gave two alternatives

But someone saysid that noisn't a good ideaway to enhance my English skills?.

Although I know you are expressing your doubt/hesitation with the question mark, this isn't a question so it isn't correct to use one.

Because tThey told me that I would waste stoo much time on the stories instead of studying.

The "because" would stay if you combined this into the previous sentence, but to use this line as its own sentence means we delete the "because"

I just want to listenhear from more people who postson here.

"Listen" tends to be for the auditory sense, for people who are literally speaking.

Just feel free to contact me!

Put your ideas oin the feedback sqaurebox.

More natural

Feedback

Great job.

I don't agree that watching TV is not effective as part of learning a language. I would advise to continue your more traditional study activities AND continue watching TV if you enjoy it.

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bobjohn

Aug. 20, 2025

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You bet! Over time, I've learned a ton of knowledge from you. However, I still have some questions I don't get it. For example," I got enormous raw've learned a ton of words that I had've never seen before. " Why can't I use "got","had nerver seen", No offence, I just want to figure out. Addctionally "I love that/hving context in TV shows" can I just use "that" or " is having more natural?". End up, I just wonder Why you pit "would advise to ..." versus will advise. What is nuance at here? bottom of line, I should say thanks so much!

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nefare

Aug. 20, 2025

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You're welcome! I'll try answer your questions.

- For example, "I got enormous raw words that I've never seen before." Why can't I use "got" and "had never seen"?

Here, you can't use "got" because it specifically does not work with "words." "Got" I think just takes time and experience to learn when it's appropriate in English, but for now, you can imagine that it's because it is for physical things. You can "get" milk from the store, but you cannot get immaterial things like words. But I admit this is far from a thorough explanation - it just might help you for now.

For "I had never seen," this would be perfectly fine to keep, the only reason I removed it is because we changed "raw" to "new," and "new" is redundant with "I had never seen." You only need one or the other, not both.

- Additionally, "I love that/having context in TV shows," can I just use "that" or is "having" more natural?

"That" is another thing that I see people struggle with. The word "that" by itself is when it is making reference to something that was already introduced, but it can only be used if it is clear to the reader what you are referring to. So your original sentence, "I love that context in TV" only doesn't work because you did not already discuss "context," you are just now introducing that subject. It would also be correct to have said, "I love the context in TV shows." We use "the" because "context" is a new subject. But ultimately, I wrote "I love having the context in TV shows" because it's also a natural alternative.

- Why did you say "would advise to..." versus "will advise"? What is the nuance at here?

Good question! I said "I would" because you can consider this as a hypothetical situation, and for those, we use the conditional (would) and not the future (will).
Basically, the hypothetical here is this, "If you asked me, I would advise you to..."

Feel free to ask questions any time.

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bobjohn

Aug. 21, 2025

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These are a big help! I like your feedback so so so much!

Daily Life: Part 8


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lalala, I'm in the mood!


lLalala, I'm in thea great mood!

I have to tell you that when someone says "I'm in the mood" it means in the mood for sex, haha

Why do i look like so great?


Why do i look likeI sound so great?

"Look great" always means about physical appearance - someone looking stylish or healthy. For being in a great mood, use "sound great."

The answer is I have addicted to serious TV.


The answer is I havethat I'm addicted to serious TV.

What do you mean by "serious TV"? This wouldn't mean anything to me. Do you mean a certain genre, like drama series?

Do you like serious TV?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

What type of TV is your favorite.


What type of TV is your favorite.?

This is a question

Just let me know, pal.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Since I began watching TV, I got enormous raw words that I had never seen to improve my explanation.


Since I began watching TV, I got enormous raw've learned a ton of words that I had've never seen before to improve my explanationvocabulary.

"Enormous" is used to describe the size of one thing, but here you want to use a descriptor that means many countable things (because words are countable, not one thing) => "a ton of" Did you mean "new" instead of "raw"? If so, no need to mention that since it is already understood by the next part "... that I've never seen before" Better to say "vocabulary," it's inherent that you can explain yourself better with an increased vocabulary

I love that context in TV.


I love thatving context in TV shows.

Every sense, sentence, and plot is perfect!


Every senseemotion/feeling, sentence, and plot is perfect!

"Sense" doesn't work here but I gave two alternatives

But someone says that not a good idea to enhance my English skills?


But someone saysid that noisn't a good ideaway to enhance my English skills?.

Although I know you are expressing your doubt/hesitation with the question mark, this isn't a question so it isn't correct to use one.

Because they told me that I would waste so much time on the stories instead studying.


Because tThey told me that I would waste stoo much time on the stories instead of studying.

The "because" would stay if you combined this into the previous sentence, but to use this line as its own sentence means we delete the "because"

I just want to listen more people who posts here.


I just want to listenhear from more people who postson here.

"Listen" tends to be for the auditory sense, for people who are literally speaking.

Just feel free to contact me!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Put your ideas on the feedback sqaure.


Put your ideas oin the feedback sqaurebox.

More natural

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