Aug. 18, 2025
Daily Life: Part 7
Today, I want to share some tips about how to abolish your bad habit. Yesterday, one kind friend who communicates here taught me some shimmery advice. I'm just following one of advice. It's worked! I just studied English without my phone, and the result is that I divided my study time by 2 times than before. While I had been studying, I never wanted to grab my phone, because it was in another room. In conclusion, it's a good way for me to avoid scrolling phone during studying. By the way, just want to say thanks you! My pal!
Daily Life: Part 7
Today, I want to share some tips about how to abolish your bad habits.
If the topic isn't about any particular habit, you'd use "habits" as plural
Yesterday, onea kind friend who communicates here taught me some shimmeryposts here gave me a shimmery piece of advice.
The act of publishing writing to LangCorrect (and any other online forums) is "posting."
Particular advice = a piece of advice. We don't use "teach" and "advice" together; advice is given and taken
I'm just following one of advicetheir tips.
"Tips" is a synonym for advice, and is countable.
It's worked!
I just studied English without my phone, and the result iwas that I divided my study time by 2 times than beforstudied the same amount of English in half the usual time.
Your original sentence just means you spent less time studying English. I think your point is you spent less time because you had less distractions, not that you studied English any less, so I edited for that point.
While I had been studying, I never wanted to grab my phone, because it was in another room.
In conclusion, it's a good way for me to avoid scrolling my phone during studying.
By the way, I just want to say thanks you!
My pal!
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Today, I want to share some tips about how to abolish your bad habit. Today, I want to share some tips about how to abolish your bad habits. If the topic isn't about any particular habit, you'd use "habits" as plural |
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Yesterday, one kind friend who communicates here taught me some shimmery advice. Yesterday, The act of publishing writing to LangCorrect (and any other online forums) is "posting." Particular advice = a piece of advice. We don't use "teach" and "advice" together; advice is given and taken |
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I'm just following one of advice. I'm just following one of "Tips" is a synonym for advice, and is countable. |
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It's worked! It |
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I just studied English without my phone, and the result is that I divided my study time by 2 times than before. I just studied English without my phone, and the result Your original sentence just means you spent less time studying English. I think your point is you spent less time because you had less distractions, not that you studied English any less, so I edited for that point. |
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While I had been studying, I never wanted to grab my phone, because it was in another room. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In conclusion, it's a good way for me to avoid scrolling phone during studying. In conclusion, it's a good way for me to avoid scrolling my phone during studying. |
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By the way, just want to say thanks you! By the way, I just want to say thank |
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My pal! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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