Aug. 16, 2025
Daily Life: Part 5
This is a continuation from last time. Finally, I got the 3 Spanish mackerel, 2 Black porgy, and almost 10 Bartail flathead. What can I say? Fisher back! Also, I think I have to take ways from fishing, because I have decided I will go to the USA to study. I need to focus on my studying for a while, I know I'm not good at English, due to my isolation at school. I have to put my whole effort into my TOEFL exam, god! Who knows that pain from a boy who never touches on English. Whatever, I still want to try it, I deserve my dream! If you can help me throughout, I will appreciate it!
Daily Life: Part 5
This is a continuation from last time.
Finally, I got thecaught 3 Spanish mackerels, 2 Bblack porgyies, and almost 10 Bbartail flatheads.
We say that we "catch" fish. "Caught" for past tense.
Saying "the" mackerel means that you have already mentioned these mackerel, and you are using "the" to refer to them. Since that isn't the case, you would just say "mackerel"
The names of the fish don't need to be capitalized - the exception is the Spanish mackerel, because nationalities (even as part of a name) are capitalized. Changed all of the fish to plural.
What can I say?
FisherThe fisherman is back!
Also, I think I will have to take ways(a break?) from fishing, because I have decided I willto go to the USA to study.
Take "ways" doesn't mean anything to me - do you mean take a break?
I need to focus on my studying for a while,. I know I'm not good at English, due to my isolation at school.
What do you mean by "isolation at school"? I would interpret this as being closed off, typically in a way that you don't interact with your peers and maybe not even your teachers. But that has more of a social impact, and wouldn't prevent you from learning English if it was one of your courses at school. In any case, it might require another sentence or two for your readers to understand this connection.
Maybe you meant, "..., due to school taking up all of my time."
I have to put my whole effort intoall my attention on my TOEFL exam, god!
Who knows thate pain ofrom a boy who never touches ongets to study English.?
"Who knows..." is phrased as a question.
If you wanted to form this as a statement, you might leave that off and just say, "The pain of a boy who never gets to study English."
Whatever, I still want to try it, I deserve my dream!
If you can help me throughout my endeavor, I willould appreciate it!
You need to state what you need help with, you can't end on "throughout." "Endeavor" is a little bit fancy, but it is not out of place here. It describes working to achieve a goal.
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Great job. You sound like a great fisherman!
Aug. 16, 2025
Great! I feel better now!
Daily Life: Part 5
This is a continuation from last time.
Finally, I got the 3 Spanish mackerel, 2 Black porgy, and almost 10 Bartail flathead.
What can I say?
Fisher back!
Also, I think I have to take waysa break from fishing, because I have decided that I will go to the USA to study.
I need to focus on my studying for a while, I know I'm not good at English, due to my isolation at school.
I have to put my whole effort into my TOEFL exam, gGod!
Who knows that pain from a boy who never touches on English.
Whatever, I still want to try it, I deserve my dream!
If you can help me throughout, I will appreciate it!
Aug. 16, 2025
Thanks! bro
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I need to focus on my studying for a while, I know I'm not good at English, due to my isolation at school. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I need to focus on What do you mean by "isolation at school"? I would interpret this as being closed off, typically in a way that you don't interact with your peers and maybe not even your teachers. But that has more of a social impact, and wouldn't prevent you from learning English if it was one of your courses at school. In any case, it might require another sentence or two for your readers to understand this connection. Maybe you meant, "..., due to school taking up all of my time." |
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