Aug. 15, 2025
Daily Life Part 4
being continued! I feel a little bit awkward. Because I got nothing yesterday. What a shame!!. But still keep motivation, I think. Should I give up? The answer is definitely no, and I will pursue my goal in the future. For now, I'm about to style my hair, going to the sea again!! I'm prepared with so many tools to help me get fish biting. Here we go!!!
Daily Life: Part 4
being continued!This is a continuation from last time.
"Being continued" doesn't work here, but here's a nice alternative
I feel a little bit awkward.
Bbecause I got nothing yesterday.
These two should be combined. You will rarely need to begin a sentence with "because," and it should be avoided
What a shame!!.
But I'm still keep motivationed, I think.
Should I give up?
The answer is definitely no, and I will continue to pursue my goal in the future.
Rewritten to mean that you are now, in this moment, pursuing this goal, and you will continue to do so in the future.
For now, I'm about to style my hair, going and go back to the sea again!!
Go back = go (to a place) again
I'm prepared with so many tools to help me get the fish biting.
Here we go!!
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Great job. Very cute as usual!
Using more than one exclamation point or question mark at a time is never correct in English (!!!! , ?!?!?!), but we often write like this over text or chat. Just so you know!
Aug. 16, 2025
That really helps a lot!
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being continued!
"Being continued" doesn't work here, but here's a nice alternative |
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I feel a little bit awkward. I feel a little bit awkward |
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Because I got nothing yesterday.
These two should be combined. You will rarely need to begin a sentence with "because," and it should be avoided |
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What a shame!!. What a shame! |
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But still keep motivation, I think. But I'm still |
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Should I give up? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The answer is definitely no, and I will pursue my goal in the future. The answer is definitely no, and I will continue to pursue my goal Rewritten to mean that you are now, in this moment, pursuing this goal, and you will continue to do so in the future. |
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For now, I'm about to style my hair, going to the sea again!! For now, I'm about to style my hair Go back = go (to a place) again |
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I'm prepared with so many tools to help me get fish biting. I'm prepared with so many tools to help |
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Here we go!! Here we go! |
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