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Aug. 14, 2025

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Daily Life Part 3

Today, I wore a pink shirt with a quote "DIALOGUE WITH AHTLEB". To be honest that I don't know what that means. I cleaned my type of hair like a handsome guy. I'm pretty sure that makes me look fresh. Now I'm gonna go to the beach near the Shinan using my fishing reel to catch some fish. Let's stick with me. I will share my victory with all of you guys. I promise that I will never let you down!!

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Daily Life Part 3

Today, I wore a pink shirt with athe quote "DIALOGUE WITH AHTLEB".ialogue with Ahtleb."

Any quote that exists: a quote
A specific quote (e.g., the one you are about to mention): the quote
Punctuation (periods) go inside ending quotation marks

To be honest that , I don't know what that means.

I cleaned my type ofstyled my hair like athe handsome guy I am.

Making our hair look nice = styling our hair.
I changed the end a bit to sound like a natural phrase; it is a little cute way to say you look handsome without sounding too arrogant

I'm pretty sure that it makes me look fresh/cool.

Alternative to "I'm pretty sure that it..." is "I feel like it..." which would be slightly more optimal here, as it is used for more subjective things.
"Fresh" isn't used very often in slang; I would just go for the standard "cool" or even "stylish"

Now I'm (gonna/going to) go to the beach near the Shinan district using my fishing reel to catch some fish.

Obligatory mention here that "gonna" is not considered as correct English, and "going to" is. But in every day life, we do say it often. Just keep it in mind for when you are doing professional communications.

Let's sStick with me.

Stick with me = you are telling us, your readers, to stick with you.
Let's stick together = you are now speaking for all of us, yourself and your readers, to stick together.
Both options here are fine.

I will share my victory with all of you guys.

I promise that I will never let you down!

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bobjohn

Aug. 15, 2025

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I'm so happy for following your step! Your advice is so Inspiring!

Daily Life Part 3


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Today, I wore a pink shirt with a quote "DIALOGUE WITH AHTLEB".


Today, I wore a pink shirt with athe quote "DIALOGUE WITH AHTLEB".ialogue with Ahtleb."

Any quote that exists: a quote A specific quote (e.g., the one you are about to mention): the quote Punctuation (periods) go inside ending quotation marks

To be honest that I don't know what that means.


To be honest that , I don't know what that means.

I cleaned my type of hair like a handsome guy.


I cleaned my type ofstyled my hair like athe handsome guy I am.

Making our hair look nice = styling our hair. I changed the end a bit to sound like a natural phrase; it is a little cute way to say you look handsome without sounding too arrogant

I'm pretty sure that makes me look fresh.


I'm pretty sure that it makes me look fresh/cool.

Alternative to "I'm pretty sure that it..." is "I feel like it..." which would be slightly more optimal here, as it is used for more subjective things. "Fresh" isn't used very often in slang; I would just go for the standard "cool" or even "stylish"

Now I'm gonna go to the beach near the Shinan using my fishing reel to catch some fish.


Now I'm (gonna/going to) go to the beach near the Shinan district using my fishing reel to catch some fish.

Obligatory mention here that "gonna" is not considered as correct English, and "going to" is. But in every day life, we do say it often. Just keep it in mind for when you are doing professional communications.

Let's stick with me.


Let's sStick with me.

Stick with me = you are telling us, your readers, to stick with you. Let's stick together = you are now speaking for all of us, yourself and your readers, to stick together. Both options here are fine.

I will share my victory with all of you guys.


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I promise that I will never let you down!


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