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Daily Life: Part 24
What's up! It was so much time i don't have written, becasue, I fished so many things during those days. Another thing is that I know Christmas is coming up. How do you decrease your house, and what types of gifts do you prepare for your family or friends? May you just share some interesting events with me? Today is a traditional festival as called Winter Solstice. People always eat dumplings today, drink white wine, and have a party. Times as fast as the flow, I have to buy some cold dishes for drinking, so that we can enjoy more white wine, as far as I even don't set anything in my house! Crap, I hope we will meet at the next time! See you all of you guys! bye
Daily Life: Part 24
What's up!
It was so much time i don't have written, becasue, I fished's been a long time since I have written an entry, because I was working on finishing so many othings during those dayer things.
Another thing I know is that I know Christmas is coming up.
How do you decreasorate your house, and what types of gifts do you prepare for your family or friends?
May you justWould you share some interesting eventtraditions with me?
Today is a traditional festival as called the Winter Solstice.
People always eat dumplings today, drink white wine, and have a party.
Times as fast as the flow, flies. I have to buy some cold dishes forto go with the drinkings, so that we can enjoy more white wine, as far as I even don't seteven though I don't put up anything in my house!
Crap, I hope we will meet at thegain next time!
See you all of you guys!
bBye.
Daily Life: Part 24
What's up!
It was so much time i don't ha1. It's been a long time since I've written because I was doing so many things during those days. ¶
2. It's been so long since I've written, becasue, I fisheduse I was doing so many things during those days.
Using past progressive tense sounds better because it represents the action (doing so many things) occurred over a span of time.
Another thing is that I know Christmas is coming up.
How do you decreasorate your house, and what types of gifts do you prepare for your family or friends?
May you justCould you share some interesting Christmas events(?) with me?
Not sure what "events" means here, did you mean "traditions" or "stories"?
Today is a traditional festival as called the Winter Solstice.
People alwayscelebrate it by eating dumplings today, drinking white wine, and have aing partyies.
"On this day people always eat dumplings, drink white wine, and have parties" would be grammatically correct but it sounds odd to me, so I offered an alternative wording
Times as fast as the flowflies, I have to buy some cold dishes for drinking, so that we can enjoy more white wine, as far as I even don't set anything in my house!.
"as far as I even don't set anything in my house!" <--- I'm sorry, I honestly have no idea what you were trying to say T_T
Does "cold dishes" refer to a type of drinking glass? The sentence makes it sound like that... otherwise I would interpret it as having cold dishes (food) so that you don't drink wine on an empty stomach, in which case you should leave out the "for drinking" part
Crap, I hope we will meet at the next timegain!
See you all of you guys!
bye
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It was so much time i don't have written, becasue, I fished so many things during those days.
Much time has passed since I have last written. I finished many things during that time.
How do you decrease your house, and what types of gifts do you prepare for your family or friends?
May you just share some interesting events with me?
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