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bobjohn

Aug. 27, 2025

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Daily Life: Part 12

Wow! Recently, I have been working on my study schedule. Ends up, I got a list that helps me learn English. I hope it can serve me. OK, I'm going to put a topic in the Native text. I decided to respond to this topic. You can point out my fault. Here we go!
I agree with Andrew's idea, since we all know, Today, we have a variety of applications as TikTok, Facebook, Instagram, etc., so that we are totally transparent. Everything on the app shared the same thing as the news. Therefore, what we know everything is equal. seconds, we use home appliances from other countries, since we use other countries' stuff, we are familiar with those products. It would help us count the differences. Also, there is someone who is stereotypical, like Claire mentioned, but that's a little precent in the whole world. In conclusion, I believe differences are becoming fewer.
😊 I know this isn't for me, but I believe I will be a better man because of all of your helping!


Doctor Achebe:
With so many opportunities to connect nowadays, some people believe that no matter which country we come from, we have more similarities than differences. However, others have observed that differences between themselves and people from other countries are growing. In your view, are differences between people from different countries increasing, or are they diminishing? Why?

Andrew:
I think the differences among us are decreasing as our exposure to products from other countries grows. We can enjoy food from any country. We can watch movies made in faraway places. We can go to a store and buy authentic goods from around the world. These things become part of our normal life and make our differences seem smaller.

Claire:
I understand what Andrew is saying, but for some people, being exposed to differences makes them retreat into their own corner even more. Look at social media. We are exposed to many different people and ideas, but a lot of people talk to only those they agree with and ignore the rest. This only makes the differences between people increase.

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Daily Life: Part 12

Wow!

Recently, I have been working on my study schedule.(NOTE: The original is fine, but the comma is optional. You can safely delete it.)

Ends up, I gotCASUAL ENGLISH: The original is fine. STANDARD (SLIGHTLY MORE FORMAL) ENGLISH: Fortunately, I use a list that helps me to learn English.

I hope it can serve me.

OK, I'm going to put a topic in the Native text.

I decided to respond to this topic.

CASUALLY: You can point out my faultany mistakes. MORE FORMALLY: I would be grateful if you pointed out any mistakes.

Here we go!

I agree with Andrew's idea, since w. We all know, Today, we have a there are variety of applications such as TikTok, Facebook, Instagram, etc., so that we a. There "totally transparent."

NOTE: I do not really understand the understanding of the phrase "totally transparent." (Only coders who examine the source code of an application can say it is "totally transparent." Usually source codes are encrypted, so that are not really transparent.)

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bobjohn

Aug. 27, 2025

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Great! like your saying!

Daily Life: Part 12

Wow!

Recently, I have been working on my study schedule.

Ends up, I got a list that helps me learn English.

I hope it can serve me.

OK, I'm going to put a topic in the Native text.

I decided to respond to this topic.

You can point out my faults.

Here we go!

I agree with Andrew's idea, since we all know, Today, we have a variety of applications as TikTok, Facebook, Instagram, etc., so that we are totally transparent.

Everything on the app is shared the same thingway as the news.

Therefore, what we know everything is equal.

Not sure what you're trying to say. Maybe: Therefore, we can know about all countries equally?

sSeconds, we use home appliances from other countries, s. Since we use other countries' stuff, we are familiar with thoseeir products.

It would help us count the differences.

Also, there is someone who is stereotypical, like Claire mentioned, but that's a little presmall percent in the whole world.

In conclusion, I believe differences are becoming fewer.

😊 I know this isn't for me, but I believe I will be a better man because of all of your helping!

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Good job! I didn't understand your point about apps very well, but most of this is pretty clear!

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bobjohn

Aug. 27, 2025

2

Thanks for admitting

I agree with Andrew's idea, since we all know, Today, we have a variety of applications as TikTok, Facebook, Instagram, etc., so that we are totally transparent.


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I agree with Andrew's idea, since w. We all know, Today, we have a there are variety of applications such as TikTok, Facebook, Instagram, etc., so that we a. There "totally transparent."

NOTE: I do not really understand the understanding of the phrase "totally transparent." (Only coders who examine the source code of an application can say it is "totally transparent." Usually source codes are encrypted, so that are not really transparent.)

Also, there is someone who is stereotypical, like Claire mentioned, but that's a little precent in the whole world.


Also, there is someone who is stereotypical, like Claire mentioned, but that's a little presmall percent in the whole world.

In conclusion, I believe differences are becoming fewer.


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😊 I know this isn't for me, but I believe I will be a better man because of all of your helping!


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Daily Life: Part 12


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Wow!


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Recently, I have been working on my study schedule.


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Recently, I have been working on my study schedule.(NOTE: The original is fine, but the comma is optional. You can safely delete it.)

Ends up, I got a list that helps me learn English.


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Ends up, I gotCASUAL ENGLISH: The original is fine. STANDARD (SLIGHTLY MORE FORMAL) ENGLISH: Fortunately, I use a list that helps me to learn English.

I hope it can serve me.


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OK, I'm going to put a topic in the Native text.


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OK, I'm going to put a topic in the Native text.

I decided to respond to this topic.


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You can point out my fault.


You can point out my faults.

CASUALLY: You can point out my faultany mistakes. MORE FORMALLY: I would be grateful if you pointed out any mistakes.

Here we go!


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Everything on the app shared the same thing as the news.


Everything on the app is shared the same thingway as the news.

Therefore, what we know everything is equal.


Therefore, what we know everything is equal.

Not sure what you're trying to say. Maybe: Therefore, we can know about all countries equally?

seconds, we use home appliances from other countries, since we use other countries' stuff, we are familiar with those products.


sSeconds, we use home appliances from other countries, s. Since we use other countries' stuff, we are familiar with thoseeir products.

It would help us count the differences.


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