Aug. 24, 2025
Today, I'm able to use the last words from the previous post. I hope I can be exposed to those words from the whole story so that I can arrange them. break my leg! Bob is an engineer from xx tech company. He responds to the Scrum area. One day, he got to percolate another company's system. He called his action a debut, and when he almost dug into the system, he entered the wrong riff, which means he can't get out of the system's safe zone. What a jerk just called out from another employee. They think Bob is sketchy! End of line, he got the dismissal.
Daily Life: Part 11
Today, I'm able to use the last words from the previous post.
No need to be redundant with the last words from the previous post.
I hope I can be exposed to those words from the wholentire story so that I can arrange them.
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Bob is an engineer from xxa tech company.
He responds to the Sscrum areamasters.
In software engineering, there are scrum masters who lead the projects.
One day, he got to percolate another company's system.
He called his action a debut, and w. When he almost dug into the system, he entered the wrong riff, which meansmeaning that he can't get out of the system's safe zone.
What a jerk just called out from another employeeAnother employee called them out for being a jerk.
They think Bob is sketchy!
End of lineAt the end, he got thewas dismissaled.
Daily Life: Part 11
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Although "break a leg" is a traditional expression to wish people luck in theater work, we never say "break MY leg." Instead, you can just use the above alternative
Bob is an engineer from xxXX, a tech company.
It feels strange to leave xx as lowercase since it is a placeholder for what would be a name, which would be capitalized
He responds to the Scrum areaworks on scrum for the company.
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One day, he got to percolinfiltrated another company's system.
"Percolate" doesn't work here, and honestly it's a bit difficult to force this word to work with a person. The only example that comes to mind for people is using it to describe thoughts forming (thoughts percolating in his mind).
Reading the rest of your story, I think "infiltrate" works best here. Infiltrate = breaking into something, usually in a sneaky or illegal way
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Some edits here were necessary to keep the past tense of the story. "Cracked into" would be more commonly used in the context if infiltrating digitally or hacking.
"What a jerk just called out from!" another employee called out.
This needs quotation marks
They thinkought Bob iwas sketchy!.
This still being part of the story, should be in past tense. Style issue, but I wouldn't use a punctuation mark here
End of line, It was the end of line (for Bob), he got the dismissalaxe.
This works better if you include this optional part.
You wouldn't say "THE dismissal" but you could have said "he got dismissed." However, I gave you a common slang alternative to mean someone got dismissed/fired from their job.
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Great job. These were not an easy set of words to force into one story! It was fun to read.
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break my leg!
Although "break a leg" is a traditional expression to wish people luck in theater work, we never say "break MY leg." Instead, you can just use the above alternative
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One day, he got to percolate another company's system. One day, "Percolate" doesn't work here, and honestly it's a bit difficult to force this word to work with a person. The only example that comes to mind for people is using it to describe thoughts forming (thoughts percolating in his mind). Reading the rest of your story, I think "infiltrate" works best here. Infiltrate = breaking into something, usually in a sneaky or illegal way This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
He called his action a debut, and when he almost dug into the system, he entered the wrong riff, which means he can't get out of the system's safe zone. He called his action a debut, and when he had almost Some edits here were necessary to keep the past tense of the story. "Cracked into" would be more commonly used in the context if infiltrating digitally or hacking. He called his action a debut |
What a jerk just called out from another employee. "What a jerk This needs quotation marks
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They think Bob is sketchy! They th This still being part of the story, should be in past tense. Style issue, but I wouldn't use a punctuation mark here This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
End of line, he got the dismissal.
This works better if you include this optional part. You wouldn't say "THE dismissal" but you could have said "he got dismissed." However, I gave you a common slang alternative to mean someone got dismissed/fired from their job.
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