Aug. 11, 2025
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today, i have dressed a cool t-shirt that has some ccoconut tree pattern, then i went to the beach nearyby the Shinan, there were so many people and seagulls. i'm really enjoying my small journey. if i were at the abord, i would want to see more beach and catch lot of fishes.
tToday, i have dressedI wore a cool t-shirt that has some cwith a coconut tree pattern, then iI went to thea beach nearyby the Shinan, there were sowhich had many people and seagulls.
QUESTION: What is Shinan? Is it a city? In what country?
iI'm really enjoying my small journey.
iIf iI were at the abord, i would want to[MEANING UNKNOWN] I see more beaches and catch a lot of fishes.
Aug. 12, 2025
Thanks for correcting my sentences. Let me learn how to use right . I'm a rookie on english, but I want to study it well for traveling the whole world. By the way, Shinan is a city where from Qingdao, do you know Qingdao?
tToday, iI have dressed a cool tT-shirt that has some ccoconut tree pattern, tThen iI went to the beach nearyby the Shinan, there were so many people and seagulls.
Aug. 12, 2025
Thanks for helping me!! You did a great job, give me five
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tToday, i have dressedI put on a cool t-shirt that has some ca coconut tree pattern, then iand went to the beach nearyby the Shinan, t. There were so manya lot of people and seagulls.
iI'm really enjoying my small journey.
iIf iI were at the aboroad, iI would want to see more beaches and catch a lot of fishes.
Aug. 12, 2025
I just noticed I can explain the same meaning with different way, what a mazing enlish, such as put on and wore that it's the same verb represent the same meaning.I'll keep practicing english, hope someday I can chat with you face-to-face. Have a good one
tToday, i have dressed a cool t-shirt that has some c I wore my cool t-shirt with a coconut tree pattern, then i and went to the beach nearyby the Shinan, t district. There were so many people and seagulls.
You could say "I got dressed in my cool t-shirt" but it begs the question of what else you put on - e.g., we expect you to also describe your shorts/pants. To just mention the shirt, I would say "I wore my..."
iI'm really enjoying my small journeylittle visit.
Here, we are wondering what you mean by journey. Are you visiting this location (around Shinan)? If so, I would use "visit."
iIf i were at the abordI lived near the coast, iI would want to seevisit more beaches and catch a lot of fishes.
"At the abord" does not mean anything in English. I am wondering if you mean if you lived by the coast; I made the edit for this case.
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Aug. 12, 2025
Thanks for fixing me, I feel better now. There is a circumstance I have to say. I've been learning english by myself for one and half years, i even don't know the whole alphabet before I self-study. I'm so bumped that you can teach me native language. I'm aprreciate it!
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today, i have dressed a cool t-shirt that has some ccoconut tree pattern, then i went to the beach nearyby the Shinan, there were so many people and seagulls.
You could say "I got dressed in my cool t-shirt" but it begs the question of what else you put on - e.g., we expect you to also describe your shorts/pants. To just mention the shirt, I would say "I wore my..."
QUESTION: What is Shinan? Is it a city? In what country? |
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i'm really enjoying my small journey.
Here, we are wondering what you mean by journey. Are you visiting this location (around Shinan)? If so, I would use "visit."
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if i were at the abord, i would want to see more beach and catch lot of fishes.
"At the abord" does not mean anything in English. I am wondering if you mean if you lived by the coast; I made the edit for this case.
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