It is cloudy and mild day , and. I like theis weather so much.

"The" is better for when you are talking about something generally. In this case you want to use "this" to refer specifically this day.

I ridingode a sharinged bike to work , the breeze kissed my face , which made me feel comfortable , although I was a little cold.

The comma "," usually doesn't have a space between the word before it.
For example "hi, how are you?"

When I was wborking ,I thought ited while I was bworking .

Actually , I do not love my job.

However , I do not know what I really like, and I am not enough brave to quit my job.

Because normal people should have a job and I also need a job to earn money .

Now , I will spend some spare time to learn English.

Maybe I could be an English teacher .

I ridingode a sharinged bike to work , the breeze kissed my face , which made me feel comfortable , although I was a little cold.

You don't need to leave a space after a comma.

When I was working , I thought it was boring .

Actually , I do not love my job.

Perhaps I hate every job?

However , I do not know what I really like, and I am not enough brave am not brave enough to quit my job.

Because normal people should have a a job and I I also need a job to earn money .

Now , I will spend some of my spare time to learn English.

I hope I I¶
can communicate with others in English.

Maybe I I could be an English teacher .

Just leave a space between each word.

And I wish I can know what I really like and what I wanna do one day.

Thank you for your reading and correcting (my work).