July 31, 2023
Daily English Diary 07/31/23
I was so exhausted yesterday; I decided to write down what happened during my trip today.
My best friend came back to our hometown for about a week. To cherish the time we left to accompany each other recently, we hung out a lot and yesterday, we went to a countryside by the ocean to catch some crabs. At first, both of us were so excited about this activity. The weather was cozy, only few torurists so it's not crowded. It seemed that everything was perfect; we even talked about how to deal with the crabs we're about to get before arrival. And it turned out dissapointed. Since we're not familiar with this fishing village, the way we decided which spot to catch the crab is based on some videos on Youtube. We thought that we're able to do the same as they did; the truth is we didn't catch a thing. And it's not just us that brought an empty fish basket home, nearly everyone there failed, but that made me feel better because I know it's not my problem that fail to catch crabs. At the end, it started raining, so I we could do is pack up our stuffs and go home.
And that's my pathetic story of catching crab. Thanks for reading.
我昨天非常累，所以我決定今天再來分享發生了甚麼事情。
我最好的朋友回來我們的家鄉一個禮拜，為了珍惜這段長期內僅存的相處時光，我們一直約出去玩而就在昨天，我們去了一個海邊的小漁村抓螃蟹。一開始我們兩個都對這次旅遊很興奮，天氣非常舒服，沒什麼觀光客跟我們擠。一切看似都很完美，我們甚至在抵達之前就討論要如何處理抓到的螃蟹。但是結局卻令人非常失望。因為我們對於這個小漁村沒有很熟，所以我們是透過Youtube上的影片來決定要在哪裡抓螃蟹，我們以為能夠跟他們一樣抓到許多螃蟹，然而我們沒有抓到任何東西。而且還不是只有我們帶著空魚籃回家，幾乎所有人都抓不到，但是這讓我比較沒那麼難過因為我知道這表示問題不是出在我身上。最後開始下雨了，所以我們收拾東西後就回家了。
這屆是我可悲的抓螃蟹故事。謝謝閱讀。
Daily English Diary 07/31/23
I was so exhausted yesterday; so, I decided to write down what happened during my trip today.
My best friend came back to our hometown for about a week.
To cherish the time we left to accompany each other recentlaking advantage of the opportunity, we hung out a lot and yesterday, we went to a countrysidplace by the ocean to catch some crabs.
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We thought that we'r would be able to do the same asthing they did; however, the truth is we didn't catch a thing.
And it's not just us that broughtBut we weren't the only ones to bring home an empty fish basket home, nearly everyone there failed, but to catch anything, and that made me feel better because I know it's not my problem that fail to catch crabs, knowing that I wasn't the problem.
AtIn the end, it started raining,; so I, the only thing we could do iwas pack up our stuffs and go home.
And that's my pathetic story of catching crabs.
Thanks for reading.
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Daily English Diary 07/31/23
I was so exhausted yesterday; I decided to write down what happened during my trip today.
My best friend came back to our hometown for about a week.
To cherishmake the most of the time we had left to accompany each other recentlygether while my friend was in town, we hung out a lot and y. Yesterday, we went to a countryside village by the ocean to catch some crabs.
"To cherish the time we had left" is generally used when someone is about to die. I understand your meaning, but it's a bit dramatic.
At first, both of us were so excited about this activity.
The weather was cozy, with only a few torurists so it's noaround so it wasn't crowded.
It seemed that everything was perfect; we even talked about how to deal with the crabs we' were about to get before our arrival.
And it turned out to be dissappointeding.
Since we're not familiar with this fishing village, the way we decided on which spot to catch the crab is was based on some videos on Youtube videos.
We thought that we're would able to do the same as they did; the truth is that we didn't catch a thing.
And it's not just us that brought an empty fish basket home, nearly everyone there failed, but that made me feel better because I know it's not only my problem thato fail to catch crabs.
At the end, it started raining, so Iall we could do iwas pack up our stuffs and go home.
And that's my pathetic story of catching crabs.
Thanks for reading.
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