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ericou

July 29, 2023

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Daily English Diary 07/29/23

I restarted reading PHAK again, it's a book about almost everything that is required to become a pilot. I used to read it upon the time I was doing the military service. The content is so much that I could only finished 5 chapters within the 4-month-life in air force, plus, the fact that it's writen in English also decreased my efficiency in processing the book. But it has to be done, so rather than complaining about how hard it is to read, I chose to do it step by step, it's better than doing nothing after all!!

there's nearly nothing happened today , so I had to rack my brain to fulfill the meaning of daily.
Btw,thanks to all who aids me and corrected my journals.


我最近又開始讀PHAK了,這是一本關於所有想成為機師的人需要知道的知識的書。我以前在當兵的時候會讀這本書。這本書的內容多道我只能夠在四個月的空軍生活內讀完五個章節,再加上這本書是全英文的關係降低了我讀的效率。但是這本書是必須讀完的,所以與其抱怨它對我的困難,我選擇一點一滴地完成閱讀,這總比什麼事都不做來得好!

今天實在是沒發生什麼事情,所以我必須絞盡腦汁才能履行每日日記的意義。
對了,我要在這裡感謝所有給予我幫助的人。

Corrections

I restartedpicked up reading PHAK again,; it's a book about almost everything that is required tothat covers practically all of the requirements for becomeing a pilot.

I used to read it upon the timeWhen I was doserving in the military service., I used to read it.¶

The content is so much that I could only finished 5 chapters within the 4-month-life in air force, plus,Because of the volume of the material and the fact that it' was written in English also decreased my efficiency in process, I was only able to finish five of the book's chapters during my four months ing the book.air force.¶

But it has to be done, sosince it must be done, I decided to do it step by step rather than complaining about how harddifficult it is to read, I chose to do it step by step, it'. After all, doing nothing is better than doing nosomething after all!!

there's nToday hasn't rearlly nothing happened today had much happen, so I've had to rack my brain to fulfill the meaning of daily.think hard to figure out how to live an everyday life.¶

Btw,tThanks to all who aidseveryone who has helped me and correcedited my journals., btw.¶

I restarted reading PHAK again, i. It's a book about almost everything that is required to become a pilot.

I used to read it uponduring the time I was doing themy military service.

The content is so much that I could only finished 5 chapters within the 4-month-life in aAir fForce, p. Plus, the fact that it's written in English also decreased my efficiency in processing the book.

But it has to be done, so rather than complaining about how hard it is to read, I chose to do it step by step, i. It's better than doing nothing after all!!

tThere's nearly nothing happeneding today , so I had to rack my brain to fulfill the meaning of daily.

Btw,thanks to all who aids me and corrected my journals.

Feedback

Since it happened several times in your text, I will share that you have two options when you have two phrases that can be complete sentences on their own, but are related to one another. One is the correction I made, to separate them into two sentences. The other, which is a more advanced form is to use the semicolon. For example:
… reading PHAK again; it's a book…
… step by step; it's better…

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ericou

July 31, 2023

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Thanks. I'll try to use it.

Daily English Diary 07/29/23


I restarted reading PHAK again, it's a book about almost everything that is required to become a pilot.


I restarted reading PHAK again, i. It's a book about almost everything that is required to become a pilot.

I restartedpicked up reading PHAK again,; it's a book about almost everything that is required tothat covers practically all of the requirements for becomeing a pilot.

I used to read it upon the time I was doing the military service.


I used to read it uponduring the time I was doing themy military service.

I used to read it upon the timeWhen I was doserving in the military service., I used to read it.¶

The content is so much that I could only finished 5 chapters within the 4-month-life in air force, plus, the fact that it's writen in English also decreased my efficiency in processing the book.


The content is so much that I could only finished 5 chapters within the 4-month-life in aAir fForce, p. Plus, the fact that it's written in English also decreased my efficiency in processing the book.

The content is so much that I could only finished 5 chapters within the 4-month-life in air force, plus,Because of the volume of the material and the fact that it' was written in English also decreased my efficiency in process, I was only able to finish five of the book's chapters during my four months ing the book.air force.¶

But it has to be done, so rather than complaining about how hard it is to read, I chose to do it step by step, it's better than doing nothing after all!!


But it has to be done, so rather than complaining about how hard it is to read, I chose to do it step by step, i. It's better than doing nothing after all!!

But it has to be done, sosince it must be done, I decided to do it step by step rather than complaining about how harddifficult it is to read, I chose to do it step by step, it'. After all, doing nothing is better than doing nosomething after all!!

there's nearly nothing happened today , so I had to rack my brain to fulfill the meaning of daily.


tThere's nearly nothing happeneding today , so I had to rack my brain to fulfill the meaning of daily.

there's nToday hasn't rearlly nothing happened today had much happen, so I've had to rack my brain to fulfill the meaning of daily.think hard to figure out how to live an everyday life.¶

Btw,thanks to all who aids me and corrected my journals.


Btw,thanks to all who aids me and corrected my journals.

Btw,tThanks to all who aidseveryone who has helped me and correcedited my journals., btw.¶

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