April 5, 2025
I will upload one IELTS writing task and its corresponding subject every day as my mock exams for practising my writing skills. If there are no accidents, I'm sure that I will keep doing this until the examination comes. Thanks to everyone helping to improve my writing!😁(●'◡'●)
I have watched a movie called "Kingsman" this evening. I pretty like the action scene of that movie, but there were a bit more dirty words. Sometimes the scene got very intense and eye-catching, which kept me at the edge of my seat. The plot also had many twists and turns, which continually kept me in suspense.
Anyway, the most impressive thing I have seen is the gentlemen in England. Every time mention the vocab "gentlemen" would make me think of London.
今晚看了“Kingsman”这部电影(“王牌特工”in Chinese),我比较喜欢里面的打斗画面,就是脏话有点多。有的时候电影的场面变得非常令人紧张又戏剧性,让我着急的快要跳起来。整个电影的剧情也有很多突变以及电影里面那种突然之间发生的意外,使我在看电影的时候一直胆战心惊。
不管怎么说,令我印象最深刻的是电影里面英国绅士的形象。每次提到“gentlemen”这个词的时候都会让我想起伦敦。
I will upload one IELTS writing task and its corresponding subject every day as mya mock exams for to practisingce my writing skills.
If there are no accidentsurprises, I'm sure that I will keep doing this until the examination comes.
Thanks to everyone who helpings to improve my writing!😁(●'◡'●)
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I have watched a movie called "Kingsman" this evening.
I pretty like the action scene of that movie, but there were a bit more dirty words.
Sometimes the scene got very intense and eye-catching, which kept me at the edge of my seat.
Anywaylso, the most impressive thing I have seen ispart were the gentlemean infrom England.
I don’t understand.
Every time mention the vocab "gentlemen"the word "gentlemen" was mentioned, it would make me think of London.
IN BRITISH ENGLISH: I will upload one IELTS writing task and its corresponding subject every day as myan mock exams for to practisinge my writing skills.
IN AMERICAN ENGLISH:... to practice my writing skills.
If there are no accidents, I'm sure that I wimistakes, I'll keep doing this until the examination comes.
Thanks to everyone helping to improve my writing!😁(●'◡'●)
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I have watched a 2014 movie called "Kingsman" this evening.
BETTER: I watched a 2014 spy thriller comedy known as "Kingsman" this evening.
I prettyN BRITISH ENGLISH: I quite liked the action scene ofs in that moviefilm, but there were a bit more dirty words.its frequent expletives offended me. ¶
IN AMERICAN ENGLISH: I enjoyed the action scenes in that movie, but didn't like the frequent swear words in it.
Sometimes the scenes got/were very intense and eye-catching, which kept me at the edge of my seat.
The plot also had many twists and turns, which continually kept me in suspense.
Anyway, the most impressive thing I have seen iswas the way it portrayed the gentlemen in England.
ALSO POSSIBLE: Every time mention the vocabword "gentlemen" would make meI think of London.
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Glad you enjoyed the film for the most part.
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I will upload one IELTS writing task and its corresponding subject every day as my mock exams for practiscing my writing skills.
If there are no accidents, I'm sure thaterrors, I will keep doing this until the examination comes.
Thanks to everyone for helping to improve my writing!😁(●'◡'●)
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I have watched a movie called "Kingsman" this evening.
I prettally like the action scene ofin that movie, but there were a bit more dirtylot of bad words.
Sometimes the scene got very intense and eye-catching, which kept me at the edge of my seat.
The plot also had many twists and turns, which continualously kept me in suspense.
Anyway, the most impressive thing I have seen isaw was the gentlemen in England.
Every time I mention the vocabword "gentlemen" it would make me think of London.
I will upload one IELTS writing task and its corresponding subject every day as my mock exams forto practisingce my writing skills.
If there are no accidUnless something happents, I'm sure that I will keep doing this until themy examination comes.
When you say "accidents", it sounds like you would only stop if you were seriously injured! "Something happens" could refer to you just losing motivation, which I believe is closer to your intended meaning.
Thanks to everyone helping to improve my writing!😁(●'◡'●)
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I have watched athe movie called "Kingsman" this evening.
I pretty liked the action scenes of thate movie pretty well, but there were a bit moretoo many dirty words.
Sometimes the scenes got very intense and eye-catching, which kept me at the edge of my seat.
The plot also had's many twists and turns, which continualously kept me in suspense.
Your original sentence is grammatically correct, but it's similarity to the previous sentence is repetitive. I've given one possible replacement.
Anyway, the most impressive thing I have seen isin the movie were the gentlemen infrom England.
I'm not sure what you mean here. Are you talking about characters from the movie?
Every time mention the vocabI hear the word "gentlemen" would, it makes me think of London.
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Keep it up!
If there are no accidentmistakes, I'm sure that I will keep doing this until the examination comes.
Thanks to everyone helping to improve my writing!😁(●'◡'●)
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I have watched a movie called "Kingsman" this evening.
I pretty like the action scene of that movie, but there were a bit more dirty words.
Sometimes the scene got very intense and eye-catching, which kept me at the edge of my seat.
The plot also had many twists and turns, which continually kept me in suspense.
Anyway, the most impressive thing I have seen is the gentlemen in England.
Every time they mention the vocabed it the word "gentlemen" would make me think of London.
dDaily writings
I will upload one IELTS writing task and its corresponding subject every day as mya mock exams for to practisingce my writing skills.
I guess you can say "my mock exams" but it feels a bit awkward here... others may disagree
If there are no accidents, I'm sure that I will keep doing this until the examination comes.
Thanks to everyone helping to improve my writing!😁(●'◡'●) I have watched a movie called "Kingsman" this evening.
I pretty like the action scene of that movie, but there were a bit morsome dirty words.
Do you mean swear words?
Sometimes the scenes got very intense and eye-catching, which kept me at the edge of my seat.
The plot also had many twists and turns, which continually kept me in suspense.
Anyway, the most impressive thing I have seen is the gentlemen in England.
Every time mention the vocabI hear the word "gentlemen" wouldit makes me think of London.
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加油!你写的很好 :)))
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