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Journal 12/6/20

Anhui Provence is located in the mid-east part of China. The Yangtze River and Huai River cross it from east to west, so that divides it into the southern part, middle part and northern part. The southern part is mountains area, the middle part is hills part and the northern part is plain area. Generally, the population density decreases in turn from north to south, but per capita GDP decreases in turn from south to north. As to the performance of the Beautiful New Countryside Construction, it is also getting better and better from north to south. Why is it this? The north is plain and open, so the scenery is monotonous and the soil is everywhere. No matter how you tidy it up, the village is hard to look nice, but in the south, there are hills, mountains, lakes, and less soil, so the villages look clean and their scenery looks nice.

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Generally, the population density decreases in turn from north to south, but per capita GDP decreases in turn from south to northNorth has the higher the population density and GDP per capita.

Journal 12/6/20


Anhui Provence is located in the mid-east part of China.


Anhui Proveince is located in the mid-east part of China. Anhui Province is located in the mid-east part of China.

The Yangtze River and Huai River cross it from east to west, so that divides it into the southern part, middle part and northern part.


The Yangtze River and Huai Rivers cross it from east to west, so that divides itdividing the province into the southern part, middle part, and northern parts. The Yangtze and Huai Rivers cross east to west, dividing the province into southern, middle, and northern parts.

When you have a list of named objects, you should list the unique names and only the object name on the last. Eg: Instead of "Bring me the red ball, the blue ball, and the yellow ball" say "bring me the red, blue, and yellow balls"

The southern part is mountains area, the middle part is hills part and the northern part is plain area.


The southern part is mountains areaous, the middle part is hills party, and the northern part is plain areas. The southern part is mountainous, the middle is hilly, and the northern part is plains.

Generally, the population density decreases in turn from north to south, but per capita GDP decreases in turn from south to north.


Generally, the population density decreases in turn from north to south, but per capita GDP decreases in turn from south to northNorth has the higher the population density and GDP per capita. Generally, the North has the higher the population density and GDP per capita.

As to the performance of the Beautiful New Countryside Construction, it is also getting better and better from north to south.


AsDue to the performancesuccess of the Beautiful New Countryside Construction, it is also getting better and better fromthe province is also improving from the north to the south. Due to the success of the Beautiful New Countryside Construction, the province is also improving from the north to the south.

I'm assuming that your sentence indicates that the entire province is improving. If you mean to say that development is focused on improving standards in the South, you could say: "Due to the success of the Beautiful New Countryside Construction, the province is reducing disparities between the north and south."

Why is it this?


Why is it this? Why is this?

The north is plain and open, so the scenery is monotonous and the soil is everywhere.


The north is plain and open, so the scenery is monotonous and the soildirt is everywhere. The north is plain and open, so the scenery is monotonous and dirt is everywhere.

"Soil" is usually used when talking it for growing plants. When talking about it as something that dirties the ground, you usually say "dirt".

No matter how you tidy it up, the village is hard to look nice, but in the south, there are hills, mountains, lakes, and less soil, so the villages look clean and their scenery looks nice.


No matter how you tidy it up, ithe village is hard to make a village look nice, b. But in the south, there are hills, mountains, lakes, and less soildirt, so the villages look clean and their scenery looks nice. No matter how you tidy it up, it is hard to make a village look nice. But in the south, there are hills, mountains, lakes, and less dirt, so the villages look clean and their scenery looks nice.

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