I donated my blood when I was in university. I donated blood when I was in university.

Blood is assumed to be yours when you donate it (assuming nothing sketchy has happened lol).

It was very painful and I had to take somesubsequently had to rest, but in the end I felt good afterwards because I felt I had done my part. It was very painful and I subsequently had to rest but in the end I felt good because I felt I had done my part.

- In English we never say take some rest, we say take a rest. When you say take a rest though, it's typically used (at least in my experience) after having done some physical exertion. If you don't use any preposition and just say I need to rest, this could be for anything so I think it fits best here. - Changed afterwards to 'in the end' to be explicit that you felt this after you had rested which was explicitly after the painful part where you had your blood drawn

It was very painful and I had to take some rest, but I felt good afterwards because I felt I had done my part. It was very painful and I had to take some rest, but I felt good afterwards because I felt I had done my part.

The way you wrote it was fine. I have provided 2 additional natural versions for your consideration: I felt good afterwards because I felt like I had done my part. I felt good afterwards because I felt as though I had done my part.

It was very painful and I had to take some restrest afterwards, but I felt good afterwards because I felt I had done my part. It was very painful and I had to rest afterwards, but I felt good because I felt I had done my part.

"Take some rest" for me sort of implies that you had to be absent from classes [or work as well if you were employed]. It's because I tend to associate it with "taking rest days" or "taking leave". I'm assuming that you just needed to lie down and relax for a bit, but did not need an extended amount of absence.

I’llt's possibly have ae that I'll have surgery in the future, so it’s mutual. It's possible that I'll have surgery in the future.

- Reworded the first bit to sound more natural. It's grammatically correct but it's not usually said in that manner - In English we don't 'have a surgery' we just 'have surgery' - It's mutual doesn't make sense here but I'm not sure what you were trying to say. It's mutual means a feeling you have about something is shared by another person. E.g I love him and it's mutual means I love him and he loves me back (because it's mutual i.e you both share the same feelings). Surgery can't have feelings back for you so you can't use that phrase here. Please comment what you were trying to say and I'll come up with a correction for you

I’ll possibly have a surgery in the future, so it’s mutual.. So, I may end up benefitting from someone else‘s similar actions. I’ll possibly have a surgery in the future. So, I may end up benefitting from someone else‘s similar actions.

I’ll possibly have a surgery in the future, so it’s mutualll be repaid in kind. I’ll possibly have surgery in the future, so it’ll be repaid in kind.

I think I get the sentiment that you're trying to convey. "Mutual" tends to mean that you and another person feel the same way about each other (either positively or negatively). To be [re]paid in kind means that if you do a good action, that action will be rewarded sometime in the future and likewise if you do something bad, a negative outcome will come about.