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Spring
As spring arrives the Earth slowly wakes up.
The cold of winter fades away and the air becomes warm.
Cedar trees begin to grow new leaves.
Many kinds of flowers bloom at the same time.
Due to heavy rain, rivers come alive again.
I like to walk around the river, taking a deep breath.
Spring is a season of hope, people are full of hope.
Farmers begin to plant seeds in the soil, looking forward to the harvest in autumn.
Spring does not last long, but it leaves a deep impression, it shows the power of life.
In this season, everything is growing, everything is moving forward.
Spring is a fresh beginning full of hope.
春天来临，大地缓缓苏醒。
冬日的寒冷渐渐消退，空气变得温暖起来。
雪松树开始长出新叶。
许多种类的花同时绽放。
由於大雨，河流又变得活跃起来。
我喜欢沿着河流漫步，深吸一口气。
春天是充满希望的季节，人们也满怀希望。
农夫开始在土里播种，期待秋天的收获。
春天虽然短暂，但留下的印象却很深，它让人看到生命的力量。
在这个季节，一切都在生长，一切都在前进。
春天是充满希望的崭新开始。
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Spring
As spring arrives the Earth slowly wakes up.
The cold of winter fades away and the air becomes warm.
Cedar trees begin to grow new leaves.
Many kinds of flowers bloom at the same time.
Due to heavy rain, rivers come alive again.
I like to walk around the river, taking a deep breaths.
I like to walk around the river, taking deep breaths.
More than 1 breath would probably sound more natural here.
Spring is a season of hope. In spring, people are full of hope. Spring is a season of hope. In spring, people are full of hope.
Or: Spring is a season where people are full of hope.
Farmers begin to plant seeds in the soil, looking forward to the harvest in autumn.
Spring does not last long, but it leaves a deep impression,; it shows the power of life.
Spring does not last long, but it leaves a deep impression; it shows the power of life.
You could use a semicolon here
Or just split it into 2 sentences: Spring does not last long, but it leaves a deep impression. It shows the power of life.
In this season, everything is growing, everything is moving forward.
Spring is a fresh beginning full of hope.
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In Australia it's autumn now, the complete opposite! Excellent writing as always :)
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Spring This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Spring arrives and the earth slowly wakes up. |
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The cold of winter fades away and the air becomes warm. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Cedar trees begin to grow new leaves. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Many kinds of flowers bloom at the same time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Due to heavy rain, rivers become lively again. |
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I like to walk around the river, and take a deep breath. |
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Spring is a season of hope, people are full of hope. Spring is a season of hope. In spring, people are full of hope. Spring is a season of hope. In spring, people are full of hope. Or: Spring is a season where people are full of hope. |
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Farmers begin to plant seeds in the soil, looking forward to the harvest in autumn. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Spring does not last long, but it leaves a deep impression, it shows the power of life.
Spring does not last long, but it leaves a deep impression You could use a semicolon here Or just split it into 2 sentences: Spring does not last long, but it leaves a deep impression. It shows the power of life. |
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In this season, everything is growing, everything is moving forward. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Spring is a fresh beginning full of hope. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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As spring arrives the Earth slowly wakes up. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Due to heavy rain, rivers come alive again. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I like to walk around the river, taking a deep breath.
I like to walk around the river, taking More than 1 breath would probably sound more natural here. |
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