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Aug. 4, 2021

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My grandmother fell this morning. She is in her 80s, and she couldn't get up. Only grandpa lives with grandma, so he called us. I rushed over with my uncles and aunts. One of the uncles carried her to the bed. Luckily she was conscious. But she didn't say a word that morning. She was old, deaf and speechless, but she could talk before. We were very worried about her. But since no one had time to take care of the elderly, we sent her to the nursing home first. I hope she will get better soon.

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My grandmother fell this morning.

I rushed over with my uncles and aunts.

Luckily she was conscious.

But she didn't say a word that morning.

She was old, deaf and speechless, but she could talk before.

We were very worried about her.

I hope she will get better soon.

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My grandma fell into the floor today.


It's sad :(


Hope she will get back soon.


My grandmother fell this morning.


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She is in her 80s, and she couldn't get up.


She is in her 80s, and she couldn't get up. She is in her 80s and couldn't get up.

Only grandpa lives with grandma, so he called us.


Only my grandpafather lives with my grandmaother, so he called us. Only my grandfather lives with my grandmother, so he called us.

"Grandpa" and "Grandma" are somewhat inappropriate in this written context.

I rushed over with my uncles and aunts.


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One of the uncles carried her to the bed.


One of themy uncles carried her to the bed. One of my uncles carried her to the bed.

Luckily she was conscious.


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But she didn't say a word that morning.


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She was old, deaf and speechless, but she could talk before.


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We were very worried about her.


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But since no one had time to take care of the elderly, we sent her to the nursing home first.


But since no one had the time to take care of the elderlyr, we sent her to thea nursing home first. But since no one had the time to take care of her, we sent her to a nursing home first.

I hope she will get better soon.


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