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The Lunar Eclipse

There was a lunar eclipse last night, and I heard that it was very spectacular. Regretfully, I missed it. I was busy with a meeting and totally had no idea know about it at that time. This morning, I found it on the network. Photos regarding the lunar eclipses filled my smartphone.
In retrospect, yesterday was the Lantern Festival and I didn't even eat sweet rice dumplings. It was a little pity, lol.

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The Lunar Eclipse

There was a lunar eclipse last night, and I heard that it was very spectacular.

We don't tend to use 'very' with spectacular. Instead you could say 'absolutely spectacular'.

RegretfulUnfortunately, I missed it.

I was busy with a meeting and totally had no idea know about it at that time.

This morning, I foundsaw it on the networkline.

Photos regardingof the the lunar eclipses filled my smartphone. were all over my feed.

Feed - social media feed (FYP)

In retrospect, though yesterday was the Lantern Festival and, I didn't even eat sweet rice dumplings.

You could also say 'looking back' instead of 'in retrospect' if you want it to be less formal.

It was a little pityWhat a shame, lol.

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There was a lunar eclipse last night, and I heard that it was very spectacular.

RegretfulUnfortunately, I missed it.

I was busy with a meeting and totally had no idea know about it at that time.

This morning, I found it on the networkws.

Or This morning, I just found out online.

It was a little pity, lol.

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It is indeed a pity. Maybe you can search online when the next lunar eclipse is happening, so that you won't miss it next time.

If it's going to be a full moon today again, maybe you can check, because the moon has been red in colour these days.

There was a lunar eclipse last night, and I heard that it was very spectacular.

RegretfulUnfortunately, I missed it.

I was busy with a meeting and totally had no idea know about itit was happening at thate time.

This morning, I found it on the networkout about it online.

Do you mean the internet in general by "the network"?

Photos regardcovering the lunar eclipses filled my smartphone.

In retrospect, yesterday was also the Lantern Festival, and I didn't even eat any sweet rice dumplings.

It wa's a little pityshame, lol.

or: It's a bit sad, lol

The Lunar Eclipse


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There was a lunar eclipse last night, and I heard that it was very spectacular.


There was a lunar eclipse last night, and I heard that it was very spectacular.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There was a lunar eclipse last night, and I heard that it was very spectacular.

We don't tend to use 'very' with spectacular. Instead you could say 'absolutely spectacular'.

Regretfully, I missed it.


RegretfulUnfortunately, I missed it.

RegretfulUnfortunately, I missed it.

RegretfulUnfortunately, I missed it.

I was busy with a meeting and totally had no idea know about it at that time.


I was busy with a meeting and totally had no idea know about itit was happening at thate time.

I was busy with a meeting and totally had no idea know about it at that time.

I was busy with a meeting and totally had no idea know about it at that time.

This morning, I found it on the network.


This morning, I found it on the networkout about it online.

Do you mean the internet in general by "the network"?

This morning, I found it on the networkws.

Or This morning, I just found out online.

This morning, I foundsaw it on the networkline.

Photos regarding the lunar eclipses filled my smartphone.


Photos regardcovering the lunar eclipses filled my smartphone.

Photos regardingof the the lunar eclipses filled my smartphone. were all over my feed.

Feed - social media feed (FYP)

In retrospect, yesterday was the Lantern Festival and I didn't even eat sweet rice dumplings.


In retrospect, yesterday was also the Lantern Festival, and I didn't even eat any sweet rice dumplings.

In retrospect, though yesterday was the Lantern Festival and, I didn't even eat sweet rice dumplings.

You could also say 'looking back' instead of 'in retrospect' if you want it to be less formal.

It was a little pity, lol.


It wa's a little pityshame, lol.

or: It's a bit sad, lol

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It was a little pityWhat a shame, lol.

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