March 5, 2023
March 5, 2023
This afternoon, I went to a shrine called Jonangu in Kyoto. Jonangu is famous for its beautiful weeping plum. There were many people to go to see the plum blossoms. The weeping plums were really beautiful. I took lots of photos. If you come to Japan early Mar, I recommend to go there.
Here are some photos: http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/2023/20230305/w800/
今日の午後は京都の城南宮へ行きました。城南宮はしだれ梅で有名です。多くの人が梅を見に来ていました。しだれ梅は見事でした。もし、3月上旬に日本に来ることがあったら、そこに行くのをお勧めします。
こちらが写真です。
http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/2023/20230305/w800/
今日の午後は京都の城南宮へ行きました。城南宮はしだれ梅で有名です。多くの人が梅を見に来ていました。しだれ梅は見事でした。もし、3月上旬に日本に来ることがあったら、そこに行くのをお勧めします。
こちらが写真です。
http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/2023/20230305/w800/
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March 5, 2023
This afternoon, I went to a shrine called Jonangu in Kyoto.
Jonangu is famous for its beautiful weeping plum trees. Jonangu is famous for its beautiful weeping plum trees.
There were many people to gowho went to see the plum blossoms.
There were many people who went to see the plum blossoms.
The weeping plum trees were really beautiful. The weeping plum trees were really beautiful.
I took lots of photos.
If you come to Japan in early March, I recommend to gogoing there.
If you come to Japan in early March, I recommend going there.
凄い！
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教えてくれてありがとうございました！よく出来ました！
March 6, 2023
Thank you!
There were many people who went to go to see the plum blossoms.
There were many people who went to go see the plum blossoms.
I took lots of photos. I took lots of photos.
lots - okay in casual writing, otherwise it is "a lot"
If you come to Japan early March, I recommend to gogoing there.
If you come to Japan early March, I recommend going there.
(thanks for the recommendation!)
Here are some photos: http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/2023/20230305/w800/ Here are some photos: http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/2023/20230305/w800/
it is beautiful *^*
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Thanks for sharing, good job!
March 5, 2023
Thank you!
March 5, 2023
This afternoon, I went to a shrine called Jonangu in Kyoto.
JonanguIt is famous for its beautiful weeping plum.
It is famous for its beautiful weeping plum.
There were many people to gohere to see the plum blossoms.
There were many people there to see the plum blossoms.
The weeping plumsy were really beautiful.
They were really beautiful.
I took lots of photos.
If you come to Japan in early March, I recommend to gogoing there.
If you come to Japan in early March, I recommend going there.
Here are some photos: http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/2023/20230305/w800/
今日の午後は京都の城南宮へ行きました。城南宮はしだれ梅で有名です。多くの人が梅を見に来ていました。しだれ梅は見事でした。もし、3月上旬に日本に来ることがあったら、そこに行くのをお勧めします。
こちらが写真です。
http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/2023/20230305/w800/
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Great writing and amazing photos! :)
March 5, 2023
Thank you!
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If you come to Japan early Mar, I recommend to go there.
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今日の午後は京都の城南宮へ行きました。城南宮はしだれ梅で有名です。多くの人が梅を見に来ていました。しだれ梅は見事でした。もし、3月上旬に日本に来ることがあったら、そこに行くのをお勧めします。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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