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Hello everyone,
I'm Laurine, i'm 24 years old. I'm from France, more specialy the north of France (Lille). I'm new here, my level in english is not exelent but i hope (progresser) with you. My project is to live in a other country so i don't have choice and i need to improve.
If you have advice for learn english is with pleasur.
In Wait of you retourn, have a good day :))))
Bonjour tous le monde,
Je sui Laurine, j'ai 24 ans. Je viens de France, plus précisément du nord de la France. je suis nouvelle ici, mon niveau d'anglais n'est pas excellent mais j'espère progresser avec vous. mon projet est de vivre dans un autre pays donc je n'ai plus le choix de m'améliorer.
En attente de vos retour, passez une bonne journée ! :)))
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Hello everyone, Hello everyone,
This is fine, for a letter you could also write: Hello Everyone,
I'm Laurine, iI'm 24 years old.
I'm Laurine, I'm 24 years old.
I'm from France, more specialyfically, the north of France (Lille).
I'm from France, more specifically, the north of France (Lille).
I'm new here, my level in eEnglish is not execellent, but iI hope (to progresser) with you.
I'm new here, my level in English is not excellent, but I hope to progress with you.
My projectgoal is to live in a nother country, so iI don't have a choice, and iI need to improve.
My goal is to live in another country, so I don't have a choice, and I need to improve.
If you have advice for learn eing English is, I accept with pleasure.
If you have advice for learning English, I accept with pleasure.
In Wwait of you retourn, have a good day :))))
In wait of you return, have a good day :))))
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Bon début ! Apprendre une langue, c'est un marathon, pas un sprint, alors continuez comme ça et vous serez surpris de voir tout le chemin que vous aurez parcouru.
Remarque : en anglais, on utilise beaucoup plus de majuscules qu'en français. Have a great day!
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I'm Laurine, i'm 24 years old.
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I'm from France, more specialy the north of France (Lille).
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I'm new here, my level in english is not exelent but i hope (progresser) with you.
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My project is to live in a other country so i don't have choice and i need to improve.
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In Wait of you retourn, have a good day :))))
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If you have advice for learn english is with pleasur.
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