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laurinerhd

April 21, 2026

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Hello everyone,
I'm Laurine, i'm 24 years old. I'm from France, more specialy the north of France (Lille). I'm new here, my level in english is not exelent but i hope (progresser) with you. My project is to live in a other country so i don't have choice and i need to improve.
If you have advice for learn english is with pleasur.
In Wait of you retourn, have a good day :))))


Bonjour tous le monde,
Je sui Laurine, j'ai 24 ans. Je viens de France, plus précisément du nord de la France. je suis nouvelle ici, mon niveau d'anglais n'est pas excellent mais j'espère progresser avec vous. mon projet est de vivre dans un autre pays donc je n'ai plus le choix de m'améliorer.
En attente de vos retour, passez une bonne journée ! :)))

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Hello everyone,

I'm Laurine, i'm 24 years old.

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Liag

April 21, 2026

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In Wait of you retourUntil we meet again, have a good day :))))

I'm not sure about "In Wait of you retourn" (In wait of your return?), is it a direct translation of a French phrase?

First Step

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Hello everyone,


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I'm Laurine, i'm 24 years old.


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I'm from France, more specialy the north of France (Lille).


I'm from France, more specialyfically, the north of France (Lille). I'm from France, more specifically, the north of France (Lille).

I'm from France, more speciafically the north of France (Lille). I'm from France, more specifically the north of France (Lille).

I'm new here, my level in english is not exelent but i hope (progresser) with you.


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My project is to live in a other country so i don't have choice and i need to improve.


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You can "need to" do something and still not do it, but if you "have to" do something, there is no choice (like you said, basically) You can also say: "so I have no choice but to improve."

In Wait of you retourn, have a good day :))))


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I'm not sure about "In Wait of you retourn" (In wait of your return?), is it a direct translation of a French phrase?

If you have advice for learn english is with pleasur.


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