Jan. 21, 2023
A Letter to Valay
HELLO， Valya! I'm glad to hear from you. How are you today?O(∩_∩)O
Today is the Little New Year's Day in the north of China.٩(๑>◡<๑)۶ We will celebrate the Spring Festival in a week. We're going to have dumplings for lunch with my family today. We're busy buying New Year's goods. We bought some meat and nuts. I even got a new coat!
It's also snowy heavily today. Everywhere is white and cold! that's the first snow of this year in my city.
I saw that you had accepted my photo invatation, so we can share our photo to each other now! HAHA(＾－＾)
What are you doing these days? are you still on winter vacation now? I'm waiting for your reply.
Wish you have a good day~ღ( ´･ᴗ･` )
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A Letter to Valay
HELLO，ello, Valya!
Hello, Valya!
There's no need to have Hello in all caps. Only one space is needed after a comma.
I'm glad to hear from you.
How are you today?O(∩_∩)O
Today is the Little New Year's Day in the north of China.٩(๑>◡<๑)۶ We will celebrate the Spring Festival in a week.
We're going to have dumplings for lunch with my family today.
We're busy buying New Year's goods.
We bought some meat and nuts.
I even got a new coat!
It's also snowying heavily today.
It's also snowing heavily today.
Everywhere is white and cold!
tThat's the first snow of this year in my city.
That's the first snow of this year in my city.
I saw that you had accepted my photo invaitation, so we can share our photo tos with each other now!
I saw that you had accepted my photo invitation, so we can share our photos with each other now!
HAHA(＾－＾)
What are you doing these days?
aAre you still on winter vacation now?
Are you still on winter vacation?
There's no need to have 'now' in there.
I'm waiting for your reply.
WishI hope you have a good day~ღ( ´･ᴗ･` )
I hope you have a good day~ღ( ´･ᴗ･` )
When you wish for someone to have a good day, this is a little more natural way to say it.
Feedback
Well done! There weren't too many big mistakes and I understood what you were saying. There were only some things here and there.
As a quick side note, remember to capitalize letters after periods, exclamation marks and question marks.
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Wish you have a good day~ღ( ´･ᴗ･` )
When you wish for someone to have a good day, this is a little more natural way to say it. |
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HELLO， Valya!
H There's no need to have Hello in all caps. Only one space is needed after a comma. |
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I'm glad to hear from you. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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How are you today?O(∩_∩)O This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today is the Little New Year's Day in the north of China.٩(๑>◡<๑)۶ We will celebrate the Spring Festival in a week. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We're going to have dumplings for lunch with my family today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We're busy buying New Year's goods. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We bought some meat and nuts. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I even got a new coat! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's also snowy heavily today.
It's also snow |
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Everywhere is white and cold! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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that's the first snow of this year in my city.
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I saw that you had accepted my photo invatation, so we can share our photo to each other now!
I saw that you had accepted my photo inv |
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HAHA(＾－＾) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What are you doing these days? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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are you still on winter vacation now?
There's no need to have 'now' in there. |
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I'm waiting for your reply. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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