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Answering a letter(not a real one)

Thank you for the letter. I would love to go to America. I have not been there, but my father has. He often tells me how beautiful Monument Valley and Grand Canyon were. I really love spending time outdoors, and I was hoping I could visit some of the national parks in the U.S. some day. I am sure it will be one of the best memories in my life if I can make it.

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Answering a letter(not a real one)


Answering a letter (not a real one) Answering a letter (not a real one)

Thank you for the letter.


I would love to go to America.


I have not been there, but my father has.


He often tells me how beautiful Monument Valley and Grand Canyon were.


He often tells me how beautiful Monument Valley and the Grand Canyon were. He often tells me how beautiful Monument Valley and the Grand Canyon were.

I really love spending time outdoors, and I was hoping I could visit some of the national parks in the U.S. some day.


I really love spending time outdoors, and I was hoping I could visit some of the national parks in the U.S. some day. I really love spending time outdoors, and I was hoping I could visit some of the national parks in the U.S. someday.

I am sure it will be one of the best memories in my life if I can make it.


I am sure it will be one of the best memories inof my life if I can make it. I am sure it will be one of the best memories of my life if I can make it.

"in" is not wrong grammatically. However, "of" sounds more natural. "of (my/his/her/your) life" is a common phrase.

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