Perfectionism makes manycauses me to feel bad feelings abouttoward others. Perfectionism causes me to feel bad feelings toward others.

Perfectionism makes many bade experience negative feelings about others. Perfectionism makes me experience negative feelings about others.

I have noticed that I have two problems makingthat negatively impact my life bitter. I have noticed that I have two problems that negatively impact my life.

“Making my life bitter” is not a natural expression, so I changed it.

I noticed that I have two problems maknegatively impacting/affecting my life bitter. I noticed that I have two problems negatively impacting/affecting my life.

And thThose feelings from that don'’t disappear but even; in fact, they make me mad. Those feelings don’t disappear; in fact, they make me mad.

And tThe feelings from that don't disappear but even. Instead, they make me mad. The feelings from that don't disappear. Instead, they make me mad.

I would(used to?) impose impossibley high standards ton others to defend meyself. I used to impose impossibly high standards on others to defend myself.

“Would” is also fine here in place of “used to”.

I would(used to?) impose impossibley high standards onto others to defend me. I used to impose impossibly high standards onto others to defend me.

I am reading books about theseperfectionism lately. I am reading books about perfectionism lately.

I assume you mean “perfectionism” here when you say “these”, but it’s unclear.

I am reading books about these issues. I am reading books about these issues.

I hope thesey can give me some (sense of) awareness. I hope they can give me some (sense of) awareness.

I hope these books give me more awareness. I hope these books give me more awareness.