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My vacation finished yesterday, I flew from Sanya to Tiajin last night. I got up early this morning and came to Beijing by high-speed train. Now I am on the subway from high-speed rail station to our office. The subway is not as crowded as usual. I thought for a while and realized that next weekend is Chinese New Year, so there must be lots of people taking time off to prepare for the holiday.
I just finished a holiday so maybe I won't ask for leave anymore.

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(Comeing) Back to The Workstation

My vacation finished yesterday,. I flew from Sanya to Tiajin last night.

Do you mean Tianjin instead of Tiajin?

I got up early this morning and came to Beijing by high-speed train.

Now I am on the subway from the high-speed rail station to our office.

The subway is not as crowded as usual.

I thought for a while and realized that next weekend is Chinese New Year, so there must be lots of people taking time off to prepare for the holiday.

I just finished a holiday so maybe I won't ask for leave any more leave.

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Well done.

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Yep, I meant Tianjin, it was a misspelling.Thanks

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MThe last day of my vacation finishedwas yesterday,. I flew from Sanya to Tiajin last night.

"Finished" is usually used for an active doer because finish is a transitive verb. For example: "I finished doing my work." Therefore, using "finished" for vacation seems a little unnatural.

Now I am on the subway from high-speed rail station to our office.

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Great job! I hope you enjoyed your vacation.

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Come Back to The Workstation


(Comeing) Back to The Workstation

My vacation finished yesterday, I flew from Sanya to Tiajin last night.


MThe last day of my vacation finishedwas yesterday,. I flew from Sanya to Tiajin last night.

"Finished" is usually used for an active doer because finish is a transitive verb. For example: "I finished doing my work." Therefore, using "finished" for vacation seems a little unnatural.

My vacation finished yesterday,. I flew from Sanya to Tiajin last night.

Do you mean Tianjin instead of Tiajin?

I got up early this morning and came to Beijing by high-speed train.


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Now I am on the subway from high-speed rail station to our office.


Now I am on the subway from high-speed rail station to our office.

Now I am on the subway from the high-speed rail station to our office.

The subway is not as crowded as usual.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I thought for a while and realized that next weekend is Chinese New Year, so there must be lots of people taking time off to prepare for the holiday.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I just finished a holiday so maybe I won't ask for leave anymore.


I just finished a holiday so maybe I won't ask for leave any more leave.

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