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Dec. 14, 2020

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Dec. 13, 2020 please correct me

I wrote a email to my teacher for asking 2 days off. Please correct me.Thank you in advance.

Good morning XX

I'm writing the email for asking 2 days off on Wednesday and Thursday. Because I have a course of the First Aid. It'll be on these 2 days from 9 am to 5 pm. I had applied the course 9 months ago, unfortunately, the lockdown was coming. It had canceled. Now I got the opportunity again.
Could you please send the PPT of the 2 days classes to me? I will study them in the weekend. Thank you.

All the best
Hym

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Dec. 13, 2020 please correct me


I wrote a email to my teacher for asking 2 days off.


I wrote an email to my teacher for asking for 2 days off. I wrote an email to my teacher asking for 2 days off.

Please correct me.Thank you in advance.


Good morning XX


I'm writing the email for asking 2 days off on Wednesday and Thursday.


I'm writing theis email for asking 2 days off onto request from you that I will need 2 days off this week, which are Wednesday and Thursday. I'm writing this email to request from you that I will need 2 days off this week, which are Wednesday and Thursday.

Because I have a course of the First Aid.


BThe reason behind this is because I have a course of then First Aid training. The reason behind this is because I have a course on First Aid training.

It'll be on these 2 days from 9 am to 5 pm.


I had applied the course 9 months ago, unfortunately, the lockdown was coming.


I had applied theo this course 9 months ago, however, unfortunately, because of the lockdown, it was comingancelled. I had applied to this course 9 months ago, however, unfortunately because of the lockdown, it was cancelled.

It had canceled.


It had canceled.

Now I got the opportunity again.


Now, I gothave gotten the opportunity to take this training again. Now, I have gotten the opportunity to take this training again.

Could you please send the PPT of the 2 days classes to me?


Could you please sendMay I request that the PPT ofor these 2 days classes days be sent to me? May I request that the PPT for these 2 days class days be sent to me?

I will study them in the weekend.


I will study them idiligently on the weekend, and I will let you know if I have any questions on them via email. I will study them diligently on the weekend, and I will let you know if I have any questions on them via email.

The added part, " I will let you know if I have any questions on them via email," is just something I would personally say. You don't need to add it if you don't want to.

Thank you.


All the best


Hym


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