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December 10, 2022
I am keen on filling up on snake food. They are so delicious. When I'm hungry, I will find something to eat. But today I found nothing in my home. So I decided to buy some snake food. I went to the supermarket. I bought some drumsticks,latiao,sweet and cookies. I'm a die-hard latiao fan. latiao is most popular snack for under 25 in China. If you have the opportunity to come to China, you must also try it. Tips : Don't eat too much
中文:我非常喜欢用零食来填饱肚子,他们真的太没味了,当我饿的时候我会去找一些东西来吃,但是今天我发现我的家里什么都没有了,所以我决定去买一些零食,我去了超市我买了一些鸡腿,辣条糖果,饼干。我是辣条的死忠粉,辣条是中国25岁以下最受欢迎的小吃,如果你有机会来到中国,你也一定要试一下,温馨提示不要吃太多

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They are so delicious.

When I'm hungry, I will find something to eat.

I went to the supermarket.

I'm a die-hard latiao fan.

If you have the opportunity to come to China, you must also try it.

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I am keen on filling up on snake food.


I am keen on filling up on snacke food. I am keen on filling up on snack food.

I am keen onlike filling up on snacke foods. I like filling up on snack foods.

!!!snake = 蛇 snake and snack have different pronunciations

They are so delicious.


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snack


sSnack Food Snack Food

or Snacks or Snacks are Delicious or Delicious Snacks

sSnacks Snacks

When I'm hungry, I will find something to eat.


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When I'm hungry, I will findlook for something to eat. When I'm hungry, I will look for something to eat.

look for = 找 find = 找到

But today I found nothing in my home.


But todayToday, unfortunately, I found nothing in my home. Today, unfortunately, I found nothing in my home.

But today I found nothing in my home, so I decided to buy some snacks. But today I found nothing in my home, so I decided to buy some snacks.

So I decided to buy some snake food.


So I decided to buy some snacke food. So I decided to buy some snack food.

So I decided to buy some snake food.

Sentences should not be separated too much

I went to the supermarket.


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I went to the supermarket. and bought some drumsticks, latiao, sweets, and cookies. I went to the supermarket and bought some drumsticks, latiao, sweets, and cookies.

I bought some drumsticks,latiao,sweet and cookies.


I bought (some) drumsticks, latiao, sweets and cookies. I bought (some) drumsticks, latiao, sweets and cookies.

I bought some drumsticks,latiao,sweet and cookies.

Sentences should not be separated too much

I'm a die-hard latiao fan.


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latiao is most popular snack for under 25 in China.


lLatiao is the most popular snack for those under 25 in China. Latiao is the most popular snack for those under 25 in China.

lLatiao is the most popular snack for under 25s in China. Latiao is the most popular snack for under 25s in China.

If you have the opportunity to come to China, you must also try it.


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Tips : Don't eat too much


Tips : Don't eat too much. Tip : Don't eat too much.

If there were more than one tip, then it would be "tips."

Tips : Don't eat too much! Tip: Don't eat too much!

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中文:我非常喜欢用零食来填饱肚子,他们真的太没味了,当我饿的时候我会去找一些东西来吃,但是今天我发现我的家里什么都没有了,所以我决定去买一些零食,我去了超市我买了一些鸡腿,辣条糖果,饼干。我是辣条的死忠粉,辣条是中国25岁以下最受欢迎的小吃,如果你有机会来到中国,你也一定要试一下,温馨提示不要吃太多


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