March 24, 2020
Currency Swap
A couple days ago, a currency swap was made between Korea and America, The F.R.B of the America has led this scheme, however, Korean government wants to take credit for this scheme, It asserted that it has led this currency swap. Actually, the F.R.B led these schemes not only for Korea itself, but also for another eight nations. The reason why the F.R.B led this scheme is to stabilize world stock markets. Just before this scheme was carried out, the Korean stock market and forex market have been plunging. Particularly, Korean markets have been unstabilized for a week, Korean markets have faced something like this sometimes, they say it's called Asian ATM. When risky situations like this comes, the foreign currencies will always flow out of Korea, This kind of thing has happened this time very seriously, Once a news of the currency swap came, the makers of Korea was stabilized successfully, but I meant to say, to be exact, just stabilized for the time being, The period of the currency swap should last only six months from now on.
A couple days ago, a currency swap was made between Korea and America, The F.R.RB of the America has led this scheme, - however, the Korean government wants to take credit for this scheme, Itit by asserteding that it has led this currency swap.
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Currency Swap
A couple days ago, a currency swap was made between Korea and America,. The F.R.B of the America has led this scheme,; however, the Korean government wants to take credit for this scheme, Itby asserteding that it has led this currency swap.
Punctuation. Present perfect doesn't really work, simple past is better for this.
Actually, the F.R.B led these schemes not only forin Korea itself, but also for anin other eight nations.
"another" is singular
The reason why the F.R.B led this scheme is to stabilize world stock markets.
There is verb tense confusion in the original statement. I felt this was the most natural way to correct.
Just before this scheme was carried outintroduced, the Korean stock market and forex market have beenwere plunging.
"were" or "had been".
Particularly, Korean markets, in particular, have been unstabilizedle for a week,. Korean markets have faexperienced something like this sometimes, they sayoccasionally; it's called Asian ATM.
I'd prefer to leave out "in particular".
When risky situations like this comes, the, foreign currencies will always flow out of Korea,. This kind of thing has happened this time very seriously,time more currency than usual has left. Once athe news of the currency swap came, the markerts of Korea was stabilized successfully, but I meant to say, to be exact, justthey have stabilized for the time being,. The period of the currency swap should last until only six months from now on.
Fixed the first conditional. If the when in your conditional can be replaced with "whenever" the verb in the condition and the verb in the next clause should be in the same tense. "this kind of thing has happened this time very seriously" sounded weird no matter how I tried to rephrase it, so I feel it works best as a comparative statement. "stabilized successfully" or "were successfully stabilized" sounds more natural.
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Well done! I don't know much about currency swaps, so I hope I've done a good job! Stay safe!
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A couple days ago, a currency swap was made between Korea and America, The F.R.B of the America has led this scheme, however, Korean government wants to take credit for this scheme, It asserted that it has led this currency swap. A couple days ago, a currency swap was made between Korea and America Punctuation. Present perfect doesn't really work, simple past is better for this. A couple days ago, a currency swap was made between Korea and America, The F We don't always add periods in acronyms. Examples of this are FRB, USD, UNICEF. It's more common not to put periods after each letter. The FRB is also sometimes referred to as The Fed or the Federal Reserve for short. |
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Actually, the F.R.B led these schemes not only for Korea itself, but also for another eight nations. Actually, the F.R.B led these schemes not only "another" is singular Actually, the F |
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The reason why the F.R.B led this scheme is to stabilize world stock markets. The There is verb tense confusion in the original statement. I felt this was the most natural way to correct. |
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Just before this scheme was carried out, the Korean stock market and forex market have been plunging. Just before this scheme was "were" or "had been". |
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Particularly, Korean markets have been unstabilized for a week, Korean markets have faced something like this sometimes, they say it's called Asian ATM.
I'd prefer to leave out "in particular". |
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When risky situations like this comes, the foreign currencies will always flow out of Korea, This kind of thing has happened this time very seriously, Once a news of the currency swap came, the makers of Korea was stabilized successfully, but I meant to say, to be exact, just stabilized for the time being, The period of the currency swap should last only six months from now on. When risky situations like this come Fixed the first conditional. If the when in your conditional can be replaced with "whenever" the verb in the condition and the verb in the next clause should be in the same tense. "this kind of thing has happened this time very seriously" sounded weird no matter how I tried to rephrase it, so I feel it works best as a comparative statement. "stabilized successfully" or "were successfully stabilized" sounds more natural. |
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